A Ballad of Metz

Louise Imogen Guiney (1861–1920) · 1884

iambic trimeter · 109 lines · from Songs at the Start

LÉON went to the wars,True soul without a stain;First at the trumpet-call,Thy son, Lorraine!

Never a mighty hostThrilled so with one desire;Never a past CrusadeLit nobler fire.

And he, among the rest,Smote foemen in the van,—No braver blood than hisSince time began.

And mild and fond was he,And sensitive as a leaf;—Just Heaven! that he was this,Is half my grief!

We followed where the lastDetachment led away,At Metz, an evil-starredAnd bitter day.

Some of us had been hurtIn the first hot assault,Yet wills were slackened not,Nor feet at fault.

We hurried on to the front;Our banners were soiled and rent;Grim riflemen, gallants all,Our captain sent.

A Prussian lay by a treeRigid as ice, and pale,And sheltered out of the reachOf battle-hail.

His cheek was hollow and white,Parched was his purpled lip;Tho’ bullets had fastened onTheir leaden grip,

Tho’ ever he gasped and called,Called faintly from the rear,What of it? And all in scornI closed mine ear.

The very colors he wore,They burnt and bruised my sight;The greater his anguish, soWas my delight.

We laughed a savage laugh,Who loved our land too well,Giving its enemies hateUnspeakable:

But Léon, kind heart, poor heart,Clutched me around the arm;“He faints for water!” he said,“It were no harm

To soothe a wounded manAlready on death’s rack.”He seized his brimming gourd,And hurried back.

The foeman grasped it quickWith wild eyes, ’neath whose lidA coiled and viper-like lookGlittered and hid.

He raised his shattered frameUp from the grassy ground,And drank with the loud, mad hasteOf a thirsty hound.

Léon knelt by his side,One hand beneath his head;Not kinder the water thanThe words he said.

He rose and left him so,Stretched on the grassy plot,The viper-like flame in his eyesAlas! forgot.

Léon with easy gaitStrode on; he bared his hair,Swinging his army cap,Humming an air.

Just as he neared the troops,Over there by the stream—Good God! a sudden snapAnd a lurid gleam.

I wrenched my bandaged armWith the horror of the start:Léon was low at my feet,Shot thro’ the heart.

Do you think an angel toldWhose hands the deed had done?To the Prussian we dashed back,Mute, every one.

Do you think we stopped to curse,Or wailing feebly, stood?Do you think we spared who shedA friend’s sweet blood?

Ha! vengeance on the fiend:We smote him as if hired;I most of them, and moreWhen they had tired.

I saw the deep eye loseIts dastard, steely blue:I saw the trait’rous breastPierced thro’ and thro’.

His musket, smoking yet,Unhanded, lay beside;Three times three thousand deathsThat Prussian died.

And he, my brother, Léon,Lies, too, upon the plain:O teach no more Christ’s mercy,Thy sons, Lorraine!

Massachusetts volunteer regiment, belonging to the Fifth

Words in this poem

went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
soothe v. t.
To assent to as true. Testament of Love. [Originally, to assent to as true; OE. so to verify, AS. ges to prove the truth of, to bear witness. See Sooth, a.]
brimming a.
Full to the brim; overflowing.
foeman n.
An enemy in war. [AS. fhman.]
drank n.
Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
lurid a.
Pale yellow; ghastly pale; wan; gloomy; dismal. [L. luridus.]
dastard n.
One who meanly shrinks from danger; an arrant coward; a poltroon. [Prob. from Icel. dæstr exhausted. breathless, p. p. of dæsa to groan, lose one's breath; cf. dasask to become exhausted, and E. daze.]
steely a.
Made of steel; consisting of steel.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Ballad of Metz is in the public domain. This text is taken from Songs at the Start, Project Gutenberg ebook #53087; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Louise Imogen Guiney, A Ballad of Metz, in Songs at the Start (1884), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #53087, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/guiney-songs/a-ballad-of-metz.html, id L11198.

Form and metre

A Ballad of Metz is 109 lines in 28 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.2 syllables. 7 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 28% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A wars · stainA · call · lorraineA
  2. 2 -A-A host · desireA · crusade · fireA
  3. 3 -A-A rest · vanA · his · beganA
  4. 4 -A-A he · leafA · this · griefA
  5. 5 -A-A last · awayA · starred · dayA
  6. 6 -A-A hurt · assaultA · not · faultA
  7. 7 -A-A front · rentA · all · sentA
  8. 8 -A-A tree · paleA · reach · hailA
  9. 9 -A-A white · lipA · on · gripA
  10. 10 -A-A called · rearA · scorn · earA
  11. 11 -A-A wore · sightA · so · delightA
  12. 12 -A-A laugh · wellA · hate · unspeakableA
  13. 13 -A-A heart · armA · said · harmA
  14. 14 -A-A man · rackA · gourd · backA
  15. 15 -A-A quick · lidA · look · hidA
  16. 16 -A-A frame · groundA · haste · houndA
  17. 17 -A-A side · headA · than · saidA
  18. 18 -A-A so · plotA · eyes · forgotA
  19. 19 -A-A gait · hairA · cap · airA
  20. 20 -A-A troops · streamA · snap · gleamA
  21. 21 -A-A arm · startA · feet · heartA
  22. 22 -A-A told · doneA · back · oneA
  23. 23 -A-A curse · stoodA · shed · bloodA
  24. 24 -A-A fiend · hiredA · more · tiredA
  25. 26 -A-A yet · besideA · deaths · diedA
  26. 27 -A-A léon · plainA · mercy · lorraineA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
LÉON went to the wars,5·····
True soul without a stain;6······
First at the trumpet-call,6···/˘·
Thy son, Lorraine!4··˘/
Never a mighty host6/˘·/˘·
Thrilled so with one desire;8·˘···˘/˘
Never a past Crusade6/˘··˘/
Lit nobler fire.5·/˘/˘
And he, among the rest,6······
Smote foemen in the van,—6······
No braver blood than his6·/˘···
Since time began.4··˘/
And mild and fond was he,6······
And sensitive as a leaf;—7·/˘˘···
Just Heaven! that he was this,7·/˘····
Is half my grief!4····
We followed where the last7·/˘˘···
Detachment led away,6˘/˘·˘/
At Metz, an evil-starred7···/˘·˘
And bitter day.4·/˘·
Some of us had been hurt6······
In the first hot assault,6····˘/
Yet wills were slackened not,7···/˘˘·
Nor feet at fault.4····
We hurried on to the front;7·/˘····
Our banners were soiled and rent;8/˘/˘····
Grim riflemen, gallants all,7····/˘·
Our captain sent.5/˘/˘·
A Prussian lay by a tree7·/˘····
Rigid as ice, and pale,6/˘····
And sheltered out of the reach8·/˘˘····
Of battle-hail.4·/˘·
His cheek was hollow and white,7···/˘··
Parched was his purpled lip;8·˘··/˘˘·
Tho’ bullets had fastened on8·/˘·/˘˘·
Their leaden grip,4·/˘·
Tho’ ever he gasped and called,8·/˘··˘··
Called faintly from the rear,7·˘/˘···
What of it? And all in scorn7·······
I closed mine ear.4····
The very colors he wore,7·/˘/˘··
They burnt and bruised my sight;7····˘··
The greater his anguish, so7·/˘·/˘·
Was my delight.4··˘/
We laughed a savage laugh,7··˘·/˘·
Who loved our land too well,8··˘/˘···
Giving its enemies hate7/˘·/˘˘·
Unspeakable:4˘/˘˘
But Léon, kind heart, poor heart,6······
Clutched me around the arm;7·˘·····
“He faints for water!” he said,7···/˘··
“It were no harm4····
To soothe a wounded man6···/˘·
Already on death’s rack.”6˘/˘···
He seized his brimming gourd,7··˘·/˘·
And hurried back.4·/˘·
The foeman grasped it quick7·/˘·˘··
With wild eyes, ’neath whose lid6······
A coiled and viper-like look8··˘·/˘··
Glittered and hid.4/˘··
He raised his shattered frame8··˘·/˘˘·
Up from the grassy ground,6···/˘·
And drank with the loud, mad haste7·······
Of a thirsty hound.5··/˘·
Léon knelt by his side,5·····
One hand beneath his head;6······
Not kinder the water than7·/˘·/˘·
The words he said.4····
He rose and left him so,6······
Stretched on the grassy plot,7·˘··/˘·
The viper-like flame in his eyes8·/˘·····
Alas! forgot.4˘/˘/
Léon with easy gait5··/˘·
Strode on; he bared his hair,7····˘··
Swinging his army cap,6/˘·/˘·
Humming an air.4/˘··
Just as he neared the troops,7····˘··
Over there by the stream—6······
Good God! a sudden snap6···/˘·
And a lurid gleam.5··/˘·
I wrenched my bandaged arm8··˘·/˘˘·
With the horror of the start:7··/˘···
Léon was low at my feet,6······
Shot thro’ the heart.4····
Do you think an angel told7····/˘·
Whose hands the deed had done?6······
To the Prussian we dashed back,8··/˘··˘·
Mute, every one.5·/˘˘·
Do you think we stopped to curse,8·····˘··
Or wailing feebly, stood?6·/˘/˘·
Do you think we spared who shed8·····˘··
A friend’s sweet blood?4····
Ha! vengeance on the fiend:6·/˘···
We smote him as if hired;8·····/˘˘
I most of them, and more6······
When they had tired.5···/˘
I saw the deep eye lose6······
Its dastard, steely blue:6·/˘/˘·
I saw the trait’rous breast6······
Pierced thro’ and thro’.4····
His musket, smoking yet,6·/˘/˘·
Unhanded, lay beside;6····˘/
Three times three thousand deaths6···/˘·
That Prussian died.4·/˘·
And he, my brother, Léon,6···/˘·
Lies, too, upon the plain:6······
O teach no more Christ’s mercy,7·····/˘
Thy sons, Lorraine!4··˘/
Massachusetts volunteer regiment, belonging to the Fifth15·˘/˘·˘//˘˘/˘···

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