Two Love-Locks

Théophile Gautier (1811–1872), translated by Agnes Lee · 1903

common measure · ABAB · 16 lines · from Enamels and Cameos and Other Poems

Reviving languorous dreamingOf conquered, conquering eye,Upon thy forehead gleaming,Two fairest love-locks lie.

I see them softly nesting,Of wondrous, golden sheen,Like little wheels come restingFrom car of Mab the Queen;

Or bows of Cupid readyTo let the arrows fly,Bent circlewise and steadyFor archer's mastery.

One heart have I of passion.Yet two love-locks are thine!O brow of fickle fashion!Whose heart is caught with mine?

Words in this poem

languorous a.
Producing, or tending to produce, languor; characterized by languor. [From Languor: cf. F. langoureux.]
wondrous adv.
In a wonderful or surprising manner or degree; wonderfully. [OE. wonders, adv. (later also adj.). See Wonder, n., and cf. -wards.]
sheen v. i.
To shine; to glisten.
cupid
The god of love, son of Venus; usually represented as a naked, winged boy with bow and arrow. [L.Cupido, fr. cupido desire, desire of love, fr. cupidus. See Cupidity.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Two Love-Locks is in the public domain. This text is taken from Enamels and Cameos and Other Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #29521, the Agnes Lee translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Théophile Gautier, Two Love-Locks, in Enamels and Cameos and Other Poems (1903), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #29521, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/gautier-enamels-cameos/two-love-locks.html, id L27018.

Form and metre

Two Love-Locks is 16 lines in 4 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 3 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB dreamingA · eyeB · gleamingA · lieB
  2. 2 ABAB nestingA · sheenB · restingA · queenB
  3. 3 A-A- readyA · fly · steadyA · mastery
  4. 4 ABAB passionA · thineB · fashionA · mineB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Reviving languorous dreaming8˘/˘/˘˘/˘
Of conquered, conquering eye,8·/˘˘/˘˘·
Upon thy forehead gleaming,7···/˘/˘
Two fairest love-locks lie.6·/˘···
I see them softly nesting,7···/˘/˘
Of wondrous, golden sheen,6·/˘/˘·
Like little wheels come resting7·/˘··/˘
From car of Mab the Queen;6······
Or bows of Cupid ready7···/˘/˘
To let the arrows fly,6···/˘·
Bent circlewise and steady7·····/˘
For archer's mastery.6·/˘/˘˘
One heart have I of passion.7·····/˘
Yet two love-locks are thine!6······
O brow of fickle fashion!7···/˘/˘
Whose heart is caught with mine?6······

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