To Boscán, from Goletta XXXI

Garcilaso de la Vega (1503–1536), translated by J. H. Wiffen · 1823

iambic pentameter · ABBAACCADEDEFF · 14 lines · from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega

I thank thee, Heaven, that I have snapt in twainThe heavy yoke that on my neck I wore,And that at length I can behold from shore,Void of all fear, the black tempestuous main;Can see, suspended by a slender chain,The life of lovers who enchanted restIn error, slumbering upon Beauty's breast,To warning deaf, and blinded to their bane.So shall I smile when mortals are undone,Nor yet be found so cruel to my kindAs may appear,--I shall but smile as oneTo health restored, whom sickness long confined,Not to see others suffering, but to seeMyself from similar afflictions free.

Words in this poem

thank n.
A expression of gratitude; an acknowledgment expressive of a sense of favor or kindness received; obligation, claim, or desert, or gratitude; -- now generally used in the plural. [AS. Þanc, Þonc, thanks, favor, thought; akin to OS. thank favor, pleasure, thanks, D. & G. dank thanks, Icel. Þ\'94kk, Dan. tak, Sw. tack, Goth. Þagks thanks; -]
twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
enchanted a.
Under the power of enchantment; possessed or exercised by enchanters; as, an enchanted castle.
bane v. t.
To be the bane of; to ruin. Fuller.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
undone a.
Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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To Boscán, from Goletta XXXI is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega, Project Gutenberg ebook #49410, the J. H. Wiffen translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

To Boscán, from Goletta XXXI is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABBAACCADEDEFF. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBAACCADEDEFF twainA · woreB · shoreB · mainA · chainA · restC · breastC · baneA · undoneD · kindE · oneD · confinedE · seeF · freeF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I thank thee, Heaven, that I have snapt in twain10···/······
The heavy yoke that on my neck I wore,10·/˘·······
And that at length I can behold from shore,10······˘/··
Void of all fear, the black tempestuous main;10·······/˘·
Can see, suspended by a slender chain,10··˘/˘··/˘·
The life of lovers who enchanted rest10···/˘·˘/˘·
In error, slumbering upon Beauty's breast,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
To warning deaf, and blinded to their bane.10·/˘··/˘···
So shall I smile when mortals are undone,10·····/˘·˘/
Nor yet be found so cruel to my kind10·····/˘···
As may appear,--I shall but smile as one10··˘/······
To health restored, whom sickness long confined,10··˘/·/˘·˘/
Not to see others suffering, but to see10···/˘/˘···
Myself from similar afflictions free.10·/·/˘˘˘/˘·

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