Sonnet V

Garcilaso de la Vega (1503–1536), translated by J. H. Wiffen · 1823

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega

By rugged ways I reach towards a bournWhich awes me not, and if I strive to slackMy usual pace, or for a change draw back,There am I dragged with cruel unconcern;But still, with death at hand, for life I yearn,And seek fresh means my footsteps to reverse;I know the better, I approve the worse,Either from evil custom, or the sternFatality of woe. Yet, my brief time--The wandering process of my wayward yearsAlike in manhood as in early prime,--My will (with which I war not now) in fact,Sure Death, whose peaceful slumber dries all tears,Make me not care the harm to counteract.

Words in this poem

bourn n.
A stream or rivulet; a burn. [OE. burne, borne, AS. burna; akin to OS. brunno spring, G. born, brunnen, OHG. prunno, Goth. brunna, Icel. brunnr, and perh. to Gr. burn, v., because the source]
unconcern n.
Want of concern; absence of anxiety; freedom from solicitude; indifference.
yearn v. t.
To pain; to grieve; to vex. [Also earn, ern; probably a corruption of OE. ermen to grieve, AS. ierman, yrman, or geierman, geyrman, fr. earm wretched, poor; akin to D. & G. arm, Icel. armr,]
fatality n.
The state of being fatal, or proceeding from destiny; invincible necessity, superior to, and independent of, free and rational control. [L. fatalitas: cf. F. fatalité]
wayward a.
Taking one's own way; disobedient; froward; perverse; willful. [OE. weiward, for aweiward, i. e., turned away. See Away, and -ward.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Sonnet V is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega, Project Gutenberg ebook #49410, the J. H. Wiffen translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Sonnet V is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 29% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AABBCCBDEDFEF bourn · slackA · backA · unconcernB · yearnB · reverseC · worseC · sternB · timeD · yearsE · primeD · factF · tearsE · counteractF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
By rugged ways I reach towards a bourn10·/˘·······
Which awes me not, and if I strive to slack10··········
My usual pace, or for a change draw back,10·/˘·······
There am I dragged with cruel unconcern;10·····/˘·˘/
But still, with death at hand, for life I yearn,10··········
And seek fresh means my footsteps to reverse;10·····/··˘/
I know the better, I approve the worse,10···/˘·˘/··
Either from evil custom, or the stern10/˘·/˘/˘···
Fatality of woe. Yet, my brief time--10˘/˘˘······
The wandering process of my wayward years10·/˘/···/˘·
Alike in manhood as in early prime,--10˘/·/···/˘·
My will (with which I war not now) in fact,10··········
Sure Death, whose peaceful slumber dries all tears,10···/˘/˘···
Make me not care the harm to counteract.10·······/˘·

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