Sonnet IX

Garcilaso de la Vega (1503–1536), translated by J. H. Wiffen · 1823

iambic pentameter · 14 lines · from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega

Oh lovely gifts, by me too fatal found!Lovely and dear indeed whilst Heaven was kind;In mine immortal memory ye are joined,And sworn with her to give my dying wound;Who would have said, sweet seasons past, when crownedWith the ecstatic hope your emblems lent,That one day you would have to representDespair so dark, affliction so profound?Since in an hour ye made unpitying theftOf those Elysian dreams, do not denyTo take as well the sorrow you have left;Else, can I but suspect ye raised so highMy youthful joys, to wish that I should dieMidst mournful memories of the bliss bereft!

Words in this poem

elysian a.
Pertaining, or the abode of the blessed after death; hence, yielding the highest pleasures; exceedingly delightful; beatific. [L. Elysius, fr. Elysium.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Sonnet IX is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega, Project Gutenberg ebook #49410, the J. H. Wiffen translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Garcilaso de la Vega, Sonnet IX, in The Works of Garcilasso de la Vega (1823), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #49410, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/garcilaso-works/sonnet-ix.html, id L18712.

Form and metre

Sonnet IX is 14 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 43% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 A--AABBACDCDDC foundA · kind · joined · woundA · crownedA · lentB · representB · profoundA · theftC · denyD · leftC · highD · dieD · bereftC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Oh lovely gifts, by me too fatal found!10·/˘····/˘·
Lovely and dear indeed whilst Heaven was kind;10/˘··˘/·/··
In mine immortal memory ye are joined,10··˘/˘/˘···
And sworn with her to give my dying wound;10·······/˘·
Who would have said, sweet seasons past, when crowned10·····/˘···
With the ecstatic hope your emblems lent,10··˘/˘··/˘·
That one day you would have to represent10········˘/
Despair so dark, affliction so profound?10˘/··˘/˘·˘/
Since in an hour ye made unpitying theft10···/······
Of those Elysian dreams, do not deny10··˘/˘···˘/
To take as well the sorrow you have left;10·····/˘···
Else, can I but suspect ye raised so high10····˘/····
My youthful joys, to wish that I should die10·/˘·······
Midst mournful memories of the bliss bereft!10·/˘/˘···˘/

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