Clendenin's Lament

Eugene Field (1850–1895) · 1905

iambic pentameter · ABAB · 12 lines · from Hoosier Lyrics

While bridal knots are being tiedAnd bridal meats are being basted,I shiver in the cold outsideAnd pine for joys I've never tasted.

Oh, what's a nomination worth,When you have labored months to get itIf, all at once, with heartless mirth,The cruel senator's upset it?

Fate weaves me such a toilsome way,My modest wisdom may not ken it--But, all the same, a plague I sayUpon that stingy, hostile senate!

Words in this poem

nomination n.
The act of naming or nominating; designation of a person as a candidate for office; the power of nominating; the state of being nominated. [L. nominatio: cf. F. nomination.]
heartless a.
Without a heart.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Clendenin's Lament is in the public domain. This text is taken from Hoosier Lyrics, Project Gutenberg ebook #36150; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Eugene Field, Clendenin's Lament, in Hoosier Lyrics (1905), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #36150, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/field-poems/clendenin-s-lament.html, id L11587.

Form and metre

Clendenin's Lament is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.4 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB tiedA · bastedB · outsideA · tastedB
  2. 2 ABAB worthA · itB · mirthA · itB
  3. 3 ABAB wayA · itB · sayA · senateB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
While bridal knots are being tied8·/˘··/˘·
And bridal meats are being basted,9·/˘··/˘/˘
I shiver in the cold outside8·/˘···//
And pine for joys I've never tasted.9·····/˘/˘
Oh, what's a nomination worth,8····˘/˘·
When you have labored months to get it9···/˘····
If, all at once, with heartless mirth,8·····/˘·
The cruel senator's upset it?8·//˘˘˘/·
Fate weaves me such a toilsome way,8·····/˘·
My modest wisdom may not ken it--9·/˘/˘····
But, all the same, a plague I say8········
Upon that stingy, hostile senate!9···/˘/˘/˘

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