To a Captious Critic

Paul Laurence Dunbar (1872–1906) · 1893–1905

rhyming couplets · 4 lines · from The Complete Poems

Dear critic, who my lightness so deplores,Would I might study to be prince of bores,Right wisely would I rule that dull estate--But, sir, I may not, till you abdicate.

Words in this poem

abdicate v.
To surrender or relinquish, as sovereign power; to withdraw definitely from filling or exercising, as a high office, station, dignity; as, to abdicate the throne, the crown, the papacy. [L. abdicatus, p.p. of abdicare; ab + dicare to proclaim, akin to dicere to say. See Diction.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

To a Captious Critic is 4 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The lines average 10.0 syllables.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB deploresA · boresA · estateB · abdicateB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Dear critic, who my lightness so deplores,10·/˘··/˘·˘/
Would I might study to be prince of bores,10···/˘·····
Right wisely would I rule that dull estate--10·/˘·····˘/
But, sir, I may not, till you abdicate.10·······/˘·

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