The Lover and the Moon

Paul Laurence Dunbar (1872–1906) · 1893–1905

iambic pentameter · ABBACCDD · 56 lines · from The Complete Poems

A lover whom duty called over the wave,With himself communed: "Will my love be trueIf left to herself? Had I better not sueSome friend to watch over her, good and grave?But my friend might fail in my need," he said,"And I return to find love dead.Since friendships fade like the flow'rs of June,I will leave her in charge of the stable moon."

Then he said to the moon: "O dear old moon,Who for years and years from thy thrown aboveHast nurtured and guarded young lovers and love,My heart has but come to its waiting June,And the promise time of the budding vine;Oh, guard thee well this love of mine."And he harked him then while all was still,And the pale moon answered and said, "I will."

And he sailed in his ship o'er many seas,And he wandered wide o'er strange far strands:In isles of the south and in Orient lands,Where pestilence lurks in the breath of the breeze.But his star was high, so he braved the main,And sailed him blithely home again;And with joy he bended his footsteps soonTo learn of his love from the matron moon.

She sat as of yore, in her olden place,Serene as death, in her silver chair.A white rose gleamed in her whiter hair,And the tint of a blush was on her face.At sight of the youth she sadly bowedAnd hid her face 'neath a gracious cloud.She faltered faint on the night's dim marge,But "How," spoke the youth, "have you kept your charge?"

The moon was sad at a trust ill-kept;The blush went out in her blanching cheek,And her voice was timid and low and weak,As she made her plea and sighed and wept."Oh, another prayed and another plead,And I could n't resist," she answering said;"But love still grows in the hearts of men:Go forth, dear youth, and love again."

But he turned him away from her proffered grace."Thou art false, O moon, as the hearts of men,I will not, will not love again."And he turned sheer 'round with a soul-sick faceTo the sea, and cried: "Sea, curse the moon,Who makes her vows and forgets so soon."And the awful sea with anger stirred,And his breast heaved hard as he lay and heard.

And ever the moon wept down in rain,And ever her sighs rose high in wind;But the earth and sea were deaf and blind,And she wept and sighed her griefs in vain.And ever at night, when the storm is fierce,The cries of a wraith through the thunder pierce;And the waves strain their awful hands on highTo tear the false moon from the sky.

Words in this poem

hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
blithely adv.
In a blithe manner.
yore adv.
In time long past; in old time; long since. [OE. , yare, , AS. geára;akin to geár a year, E. year. Year.]
olden a.
Old; ancient; as, the olden time.
sadly adv.
Wearily; heavily; firmly.
marge n.
Border; margin; edge; verge. [F. marge. See Margin.]
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
wraith n.
An apparition of a person in his exact likeness, seen before death, or a little after; hence, an apparition; a specter; a vision; an unreal image. [Scot. wraith, warth; probably originally, a guardian angel, from Icel. vörthr a warden, guardian, akin to E. ward. See Ward a guard.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Lover and the Moon is 56 lines in 7 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABBACCDD, complete in 6 of its 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 76%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.4 syllables. 12% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBACCDD waveA · trueB · sueB · graveA · saidC · deadC · juneD · moonD
  2. 2 ABBACCDD moonA · aboveB · loveB · juneA · vineC · mineC · stillD · willD
  3. 3 ABBACCDD seasA · strandsB · landsB · breezeA · mainC · againC · soonD · moonD
  4. 4 ABBACCDD placeA · chairB · hairB · faceA · bowedC · cloudC · margeD · chargeD
  5. 5 ABBA--CC keptA · cheekB · weakB · weptA · plead · said · menC · againC
  6. 6 ABBACCDD graceA · menB · againB · faceA · moonC · soonC · stirredD · heardD
  7. 7 ABBACCDD rainA · windB · blindB · vainA · fierceC · pierceC · highD · skyD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A lover whom duty called over the wave,10·/˘·/˘····
With himself communed: "Will my love be true10·˘//˘·····
If left to herself? Had I better not sue11···˘/··/˘··
Some friend to watch over her, good and grave?10··········
But my friend might fail in my need," he said,10··········
"And I return to find love dead.8··˘/····
Since friendships fade like the flow'rs of June,9·/˘······
I will leave her in charge of the stable moon."11········/˘·
Then he said to the moon: "O dear old moon,10··········
Who for years and years from thy thrown above10··········
Hast nurtured and guarded young lovers and love,11·/˘·/˘·/˘··
My heart has but come to its waiting June,10·······/˘·
And the promise time of the budding vine;10··/˘···/˘·
Oh, guard thee well this love of mine."8········
And he harked him then while all was still,10···˘······
And the pale moon answered and said, "I will."10····/˘····
And he sailed in his ship o'er many seas,10·······/˘·
And he wandered wide o'er strange far strands:10··/˘˘·····
In isles of the south and in Orient lands,11·······/˘··
Where pestilence lurks in the breath of the breeze.10·/˘·······
But his star was high, so he braved the main,10··········
And sailed him blithely home again;9··˘·/˘·˘/
And with joy he bended his footsteps soon10····/˘·/··
To learn of his love from the matron moon.10·······/˘·
She sat as of yore, in her olden place,10·······/˘·
Serene as death, in her silver chair.9˘/····/˘·
A white rose gleamed in her whiter hair,10····˘··/˘·
And the tint of a blush was on her face.10··········
At sight of the youth she sadly bowed10······/˘·˘
And hid her face 'neath a gracious cloud.9······/˘·
She faltered faint on the night's dim marge,10·/˘˘······
But "How," spoke the youth, "have you kept your charge?"10··········
The moon was sad at a trust ill-kept;9·········
The blush went out in her blanching cheek,9······/˘·
And her voice was timid and low and weak,10····/˘····
As she made her plea and sighed and wept.10·······˘··
"Oh, another prayed and another plead,10·˘/˘··˘/˘·
And I could n't resist," she answering said;10····˘/·/˘·
"But love still grows in the hearts of men:9·········
Go forth, dear youth, and love again."8······˘/
But he turned him away from her proffered grace.11····˘/··/˘·
"Thou art false, O moon, as the hearts of men,10··········
I will not, will not love again."8······˘/
And he turned sheer 'round with a soul-sick face10··········
To the sea, and cried: "Sea, curse the moon,9·········
Who makes her vows and forgets so soon."9·····˘/··
And the awful sea with anger stirred,10··/˘··/˘·˘
And his breast heaved hard as he lay and heard.10··········
And ever the moon wept down in rain,9·/˘······
And ever her sighs rose high in wind;9·/˘······
But the earth and sea were deaf and blind,9·········
And she wept and sighed her griefs in vain.10·····˘····
And ever at night, when the storm is fierce,10·/˘·······
The cries of a wraith through the thunder pierce;10·······/˘·
And the waves strain their awful hands on high10·····/˘···
To tear the false moon from the sky.8········

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