Lonesome
Mother 's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two,An', oh, the house is lonesome ez a nest whose birds has flewTo other trees to build ag'in; the rooms seem jest so bareThat the echoes run like sperrits from the kitchen to the stair.The shetters flap more lazy-like 'n what they used to do,Sence mother 's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two.
We 've killed the fattest chicken an' we've cooked her to a turn;We 've made the richest gravy, but I jest don't give a durnFur nothin' 'at I drink er eat, er nothin' 'at I see.The food ain't got the pleasant taste it used to have to me.They 's somep'n' stickin' in my throat ez tight ez hardened glue,Sence mother's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two.
The hollyhocks air jest ez pink, they 're double ones at that,An' I wuz prouder of 'em than a baby of a cat.But now I don't go near 'em, though they nod an' blush at me,Fur they 's somep'n' seems to gall me in their keerless sort o' gleeAn' all their fren'ly noddin' an' their blushin' seems to say:"You 're purty lonesome, John, old boy, sence mother 's gone away."
The neighbors ain't so fren'ly ez it seems they 'd ort to be;They seem to be a-lookin' kinder sideways like at me,A-kinder feared they 'd tech me off ez ef I wuz a match,An' all because 'at mother 's gone an' I 'm a-keepin' batch!I 'm shore I don't do nothin' worse 'n what I used to do'Fore mother went a-visitin' to spend a month er two.
The sparrers ac's more fearsome like an' won't hop quite so near,The cricket's chirp is sadder, an' the sky ain't ha'f so clear;When ev'nin' comes, I set an' smoke tell my eyes begin to swim,An' things aroun' commence to look all blurred an' faint an' dim.Well, I guess I 'll have to own up 'at I 'm feelin' purty blueSence mother's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two.
Words in this poem
- lonesome a.
- Secluded from society; not frequented by human beings; solitary.
- jest n.
- A deed; an action; a gest. [OE. jeste, geste, deed, action, story, tale, OF. geste, LL. gesta, orig., exploits, neut. pl. from L. gestus, p. p. of gerere to bear, carry, accomplish, perfor]
- glee n.
- Music; minstrelsy; entertainment.
- batch n.
- The quantity of bread baked at one time. [OE. bache, bacche, fr. AS. bacan to bake; cf. G. gebäck and D. baksel. See Bake, v. t.]
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- fearsome a.
- Frightful; causing fear
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Lonesome is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Complete Poems of Paul Laurence Dunbar, Project Gutenberg ebook #18338; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Lonesome is 30 lines in 5 stanzas of 6 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABBCC, complete in 4 of its 5 stanzas. The metre is iambic heptameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 14.5 syllables. 20% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic heptameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBAA twoA · flewA · bareB · stairB · doA · twoA
- 2 AABBCC turnA · durnA · seeB · meB · glueC · twoC
- 3 AABBCC thatA · catA · meB · gleeB · sayC · awayC
- 4 AABBCC beA · meA · matchB · batchB · doC · twoC
- 5 AABBCC nearA · clearA · swimB · dimB · blueC · twoC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic heptameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Mother 's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two, | 14 | /˘············ |
| An', oh, the house is lonesome ez a nest whose birds has flew | 14 | ·····/˘······· |
| To other trees to build ag'in; the rooms seem jest so bare | 14 | ·/˘···˘/······ |
| That the echoes run like sperrits from the kitchen to the stair. | 15 | ··/˘······/˘··· |
| The shetters flap more lazy-like 'n what they used to do, | 14 | ·/˘··/˘······· |
| Sence mother 's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two. | 15 | ·/˘············ |
| We 've killed the fattest chicken an' we've cooked her to a turn; | 15 | ····/˘/˘······· |
| We 've made the richest gravy, but I jest don't give a durn | 15 | ····/˘/˘······· |
| Fur nothin' 'at I drink er eat, er nothin' 'at I see. | 14 | ·/˘······/˘··· |
| The food ain't got the pleasant taste it used to have to me. | 14 | ·····/˘······· |
| They 's somep'n' stickin' in my throat ez tight ez hardened glue, | 15 | ············/˘· |
| Sence mother's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two. | 14 | ·/˘··········· |
| The hollyhocks air jest ez pink, they 're double ones at that, | 15 | ·/˘·······/˘··· |
| An' I wuz prouder of 'em than a baby of a cat. | 14 | ···/˘····/˘··· |
| But now I don't go near 'em, though they nod an' blush at me, | 14 | ·············· |
| Fur they 's somep'n' seems to gall me in their keerless sort o' glee | 16 | ················ |
| An' all their fren'ly noddin' an' their blushin' seems to say: | 14 | ·············· |
| "You 're purty lonesome, John, old boy, sence mother 's gone away." | 16 | ····/˘····/˘··˘/ |
| The neighbors ain't so fren'ly ez it seems they 'd ort to be; | 15 | ·/˘············ |
| They seem to be a-lookin' kinder sideways like at me, | 14 | ·····/˘/˘/···· |
| A-kinder feared they 'd tech me off ez ef I wuz a match, | 14 | ·/············ |
| An' all because 'at mother 's gone an' I 'm a-keepin' batch! | 16 | ·····/˘········· |
| I 'm shore I don't do nothin' worse 'n what I used to do | 15 | ······/˘······· |
| 'Fore mother went a-visitin' to spend a month er two. | 14 | ·/˘··········· |
| The sparrers ac's more fearsome like an' won't hop quite so near, | 14 | ·····/˘······· |
| The cricket's chirp is sadder, an' the sky ain't ha'f so clear; | 14 | ·/˘··/˘······· |
| When ev'nin' comes, I set an' smoke tell my eyes begin to swim, | 15 | ···········˘/·· |
| An' things aroun' commence to look all blurred an' faint an' dim. | 14 | ····˘/········ |
| Well, I guess I 'll have to own up 'at I 'm feelin' purty blue | 17 | ············/˘··· |
| Sence mother's gone a-visitin' to spend a month er two. | 14 | ·/˘··········· |
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