The Fires of God III

John Drinkwater (1882–1937) · 1919

iambic pentameter · 52 lines · from Poems, 1908-1919

Then a great change befell;Long time I stoodIn witless hardihoodWith eyes on one sole changeless vision set--The deep disturbèd fretOf men who made brief tarrying in hellOn their earth travelling.It was as though the lives of men should beSee circle-wise, whereof one little spanThrough which all passed was blackened with the wingOf perilous evil, bateless misery.But all beyond, making the whole completeO’er which the travelling feetOf every manMade way or ever he might come to death,Was odorous with the breathOf honey-laden flowers, and aliveWith sacrificial ministrations sweetOf man to man, and swift and holy loves,And large heroic hopes, whereby should thriveMan’s spirit as he movesFrom dawn of life to the great dawn of death.

It was as though mine eyes were set aloneUpon that woeful passage of despair,Until I held that life had never knownDominion but in this most troubled placeWhere many a ruined graceAnd many a friendless careRan to and fro in sorrowful unrest.Still in my hand I pressedHope’s fragile chalice, whence I drew deep draughtsThat heartened me that even yet should growOut of this dread confusion, as of broken craftsDriven along ungovernable seas,Prosperous order, and that I should knowAfter long vigil all the mysteriesOf human wonder and of human fate.

O fool, O only greatIn pride unhallowed, O most blind of heart!Confusion but more dark confusion bred,Grief nurtured grief, I cried aloud and said,“Through trackless ways the soul of man is hurled,No sign upon the forehead of the skies,No beacon, and no chartAre given to him, and the inscrutable worldBut mocks his scars and fills his mouth with dust.”

And lies bore liesAnd lust bore lust,And the world was heavy with flowerless rods,And pride outranThe strength of a manWho had set himself in the place of gods.

Words in this poem

witless a.
Destitute of wit or understanding; wanting thought; hence, indiscreet; not under the guidance of judgment.
hardihood n.
Boldness, united with firmness and constancy of mind; bravery; intrepidity; also, audaciousness; impudence. [Hardy + -hood.]
changeless a.
That can not be changed; constant; as, a changeless purpose.
whereof adv.
Of which; of whom; formerly, also, with which; -- used relatively.
bateless a.
Not to be abated.
sacrificial a.
Of or pertaining to sacrifice or sacrifices; consisting in sacrifice; performing sacrifice.
friendless a.
Destitute of friends; forsaken. [AS. freóndleás.]
unrest n.
Want of rest or repose; unquietness; sleeplessness; uneasiness; disquietude.
chalice n.
A cup or bowl; especially, the cup used in the sacrament of the Lord's Supper. [OR. chalis, calice, OF. chalice, calice, F. calice, fr. L. calix, akin to Gr. helmet. Cf. Calice, Calyx.]
vigil n.
Abstinence from sleep, whether at a time when sleep is customary or not; the act of keeping awake, or the state of being awake, or the state of being awake; sleeplessness; wakefulness; watch. [OE. vigile, L. vigilia, from vigil awake, watchful, probably akin to E. wake: cf. F. vigile. See Wake, v. i., and cf. Reveille, Surveillance, Vedette, Vegetable]
unhallowed a.
Not consecrated; hence, profane; unholy; impious; wicked. [Pref. un- not + hallowed.]
aloud adv.
With a loud voice, or great noise; loudly; audibly. [Pref. a- + loud.]
trackless a.
Having no track; marked by no footsteps; untrodden; as, a trackless desert.
lust v. i.
To list; to like. [AS. lystan. See Lust, n., and cf. List to choose.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Fires of God III is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, 1908-1919, Project Gutenberg ebook #51575; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Fires of God III is 52 lines in 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBCCA--D--EEDFFGE-G-F befellA · stoodB · hardihoodB · setC · fretC · hellA · travelling · be · spanD · wing · misery · completeE · feetE · manD · deathF · breathF · aliveG · sweetE · loves · thriveG · moves · deathF
  2. 2 HIHJJIKKLML-M-N aloneH · despairI · knownH · placeJ · graceJ · careI · unrestK · pressedK · draughtsL · growM · craftsL · seas · knowM · mysteries · fateN
  3. 3 NOPPQROQS greatN · heartO · bredP · saidP · hurledQ · skiesR · chartO · worldQ · dustS
  4. 4 RSTUUT liesR · lustS · rodsT · outranU · manU · godsT
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Then a great change befell;6····˘/
Long time I stood4····
In witless hardihood6·/˘/˘˘
With eyes on one sole changeless vision set--10·····/˘/˘·
The deep disturbèd fret5·····
Of men who made brief tarrying in hell10·····/˘˘··
On their earth travelling.6···/˘˘
It was as though the lives of men should be10··········
See circle-wise, whereof one little span10·/˘····/˘·
Through which all passed was blackened with the wing10·····/˘···
Of perilous evil, bateless misery.11·/˘˘/˘/˘/˘˘
But all beyond, making the whole complete10····/˘··˘/
O’er which the travelling feet7···/˘˘·
Of every man5·/˘˘·
Made way or ever he might come to death,10···/˘·····
Was odorous with the breath7·/˘˘···
Of honey-laden flowers, and alive10·/˘/˘/˘·˘/
With sacrificial ministrations sweet10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
Of man to man, and swift and holy loves,10·······/˘·
And large heroic hopes, whereby should thrive10··˘/˘·····
Man’s spirit as he moves6·/˘···
From dawn of life to the great dawn of death.10··········
It was as though mine eyes were set alone10········˘/
Upon that woeful passage of despair,10···/˘/˘·˘/
Until I held that life had never known10·······/˘·
Dominion but in this most troubled place10˘/˘····/˘·
Where many a ruined grace7·/˘·/˘·
And many a friendless care7·/˘·/˘·
Ran to and fro in sorrowful unrest.10·····/˘˘˘/
Still in my hand I pressed6······
Hope’s fragile chalice, whence I drew deep draughts10·/˘/˘·····
That heartened me that even yet should grow10·/˘··/˘···
Out of this dread confusion, as of broken crafts12····˘/˘··/˘·
Driven along ungovernable seas,10/˘˘/˘/˘˘˘·
Prosperous order, and that I should know10/˘˘/˘·····
After long vigil all the mysteries10···/˘··/˘˘
Of human wonder and of human fate.10·/˘/˘··/˘·
O fool, O only great6···/˘·
In pride unhallowed, O most blind of heart!10··˘/˘·····
Confusion but more dark confusion bred,10˘/˘···˘/˘·
Grief nurtured grief, I cried aloud and said,10·/˘···˘/··
“Through trackless ways the soul of man is hurled,10·/˘·······
No sign upon the forehead of the skies,10·····/˘···
No beacon, and no chart6·/˘···
Are given to him, and the inscrutable world10·/····˘/˘·
But mocks his scars and fills his mouth with dust.”10··········
And lies bore lies4····
And lust bore lust,4····
And the world was heavy with flowerless rods,11····/˘·/˘˘·
And pride outran4··˘/
The strength of a man5·····
Who had set himself in the place of gods.10···˘/·····

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