Deer

John Drinkwater (1882–1937) · 1919

trochaic pentameter · rhyming couplets · 14 lines · from Poems, 1908-1919

Shy in their herding dwell the fallow deer.They are spirits of wild sense. Nobody nearComes upon their pastures. There a life they live,Of sufficient beauty, phantom, fugitive,Treading as in jungles free leopards do,Printless as evelight, instant as dew.The great kine are patient, and home-coming sheepKnow our bidding. The fallow deer keepDelicate and far their counsels wild,Never to be folded reconciledTo the spoiling hand as the poor flocks are:Lightfoot, and swift, and unfamiliar,These you may not hinder, unconfinedBeautiful flocks of the mind.

Words in this poem

dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
nobody n.
No person; no one; not anybody. [No, a. + body.]
printless a.
Making no imprint.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Deer is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, 1908-1919, Project Gutenberg ebook #51575; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Drinkwater, Deer, in Poems, 1908-1919 (1919), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #51575, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/drinkwater-poems/deer.html, id L23137.

Form and metre

Deer is 14 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 86% of the lines. The metre is trochaic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEE--FF deerA · nearA · liveB · fugitiveB · doC · dewC · sheepD · keepD · wildE · reconciledE · are · unfamiliar · unconfinedF · mindF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Shy in their herding dwell the fallow deer.10···/˘··/··
They are spirits of wild sense. Nobody near11··/˘···/···
Comes upon their pastures. There a life they live,11····/˘·····
Of sufficient beauty, phantom, fugitive,10·˘/˘/˘/˘/˘
Treading as in jungles free leopards do,10/˘··/˘·/˘·
Printless as evelight, instant as dew.10/˘····/˘··
The great kine are patient, and home-coming sheep11····/˘··/˘·
Know our bidding. The fallow deer keep9·//˘·/···
Delicate and far their counsels wild,8/˘···/˘·
Never to be folded reconciled8/··/˘/˘·
To the spoiling hand as the poor flocks are:10··/˘······
Lightfoot, and swift, and unfamiliar,9/·····˘/˘
These you may not hinder, unconfined9····/˘·˘/
Beautiful flocks of the mind.7/˘˘····

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