To Mr R. W
If, as mine is, thy life a slumber be,Seeme, when thou read'st these lines, to dreame of me,Never did Morpheus nor his brother weareShapes soe like those Shapes, whom they would appeare,As this my letter is like me, for itHath my name, words, hand, feet, heart, minde and wit;It is my deed of gift of mee to thee,It is my Will, my selfe the Legacie.So thy retyrings I love, yea envie,Bred in thee by a wise melancholy,That I rejoyce, that unto where thou art,Though I stay here, I can thus send my heart,As kindly'as any enamored PatientHis Picture to his absent Love hath sent.
All newes I thinke sooner reach thee then mee;Havens are Heavens, and Ships wing'd Angels be,The which both Gospell, and sterne threatnings bring;Guyanaes harvest is nip'd in the spring,I feare; And with us (me thinkes) Fate deales soAs with the Jewes guide God did; he did showHim the rich land, but bar'd his entry in:Oh, slownes is our punishment and sinne.Perchance, these Spanish businesse being done,Which as the Earth betweene the Moone and SunEclipse the light which Guyana would give,Our discontinued hopes we shall retrive:But if (as all th'All must) hopes smoake away,Is not Almightie Vertue'an India?
If men be worlds, there is in every oneSome thing to answere in some proportionAll the worlds riches: And in good men, this,Vertue, our formes forme and our soules soule, is.
Kindly I envy thy songs perfectionBuilt of all th'elements as our bodyes are:That Litle of earth that is in it, is a faireDelicious garden where all sweetes are sowne.In it is cherishing fyer which dryes in meeGriefe which did drowne me: and halfe quench'd by itAre satirique fyres which urg'd me to have writtIn skorne of all: for now I admyre thee.And as Ayre doth fullfill the hollownesOf rotten walls; so it myne emptines,Where tost and mov'd it did beget this soundWhich as a lame Eccho of thyne doth rebound.Oh, I was dead; but since thy song new Life did give,I recreated, even by thy creature, live.
Words in this poem
- morpheus n.
- The god of dreams.
- envie v. i.
- To vie; to emulate; to strive. [See Vie.]
- gospell v. t.
- To instruct in the gospel.
- sinne adv.
- Old form of Since. [Obs. or Prov.Eng. & Scot.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- writt
- 3d pers. sing. pres. of Write, for writeth.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
To Mr R. W is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poems of John Donne, Volume 1 (of 2) Edited from the Old Editions and Numerous Manuscripts, Project Gutenberg ebook #48688; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: John Donne, To Mr R. W, in Poems (1633), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #48688, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/donne-poems/to-mr-r-w-2.html, id L04974.
Form and metre
To Mr R. W is 46 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 61% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 78%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.2 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 33% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCADD-EEFF beA · meA · weareB · appeareB · itC · witC · theeA · legacieD · envieD · melancholy · artE · heartE · patientF · sentF
- 2 AABBCCDDEE---- meeA · beA · bringB · springB · soC · showC · inD · sinneD · doneE · sunE · give · retrive · away · india
- 3 AA-- oneA · proportionA · this · is
- 4 ----ABBACCDDEE perfection · are · faire · sowne · meeA · itB · writtB · theeA · hollownesC · emptinesC · soundD · reboundD · giveE · liveE
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| If, as mine is, thy life a slumber be, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Seeme, when thou read'st these lines, to dreame of me, | 10 | ·········· |
| Never did Morpheus nor his brother weare | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| Shapes soe like those Shapes, whom they would appeare, | 10 | ·········· |
| As this my letter is like me, for it | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Hath my name, words, hand, feet, heart, minde and wit; | 10 | ·········· |
| It is my deed of gift of mee to thee, | 10 | ·········· |
| It is my Will, my selfe the Legacie. | 10 | ·········· |
| So thy retyrings I love, yea envie, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Bred in thee by a wise melancholy, | 10 | ······/˘·˘ |
| That I rejoyce, that unto where thou art, | 10 | ·········· |
| Though I stay here, I can thus send my heart, | 10 | ·········· |
| As kindly'as any enamored Patient | 10 | ···/˘˘/˘/˘ |
| His Picture to his absent Love hath sent. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| All newes I thinke sooner reach thee then mee; | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| Havens are Heavens, and Ships wing'd Angels be, | 11 | /˘·/˘···/˘· |
| The which both Gospell, and sterne threatnings bring; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Guyanaes harvest is nip'd in the spring, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| I feare; And with us (me thinkes) Fate deales so | 10 | ·········· |
| As with the Jewes guide God did; he did show | 10 | ·········· |
| Him the rich land, but bar'd his entry in: | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Oh, slownes is our punishment and sinne. | 10 | ···/˘/˘˘·· |
| Perchance, these Spanish businesse being done, | 10 | ˘/·/˘···/· |
| Which as the Earth betweene the Moone and Sun | 10 | ·········· |
| Eclipse the light which Guyana would give, | 10 | ˘/····/˘·· |
| Our discontinued hopes we shall retrive: | 10 | /˘˘/˘····· |
| But if (as all th'All must) hopes smoake away, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Is not Almightie Vertue'an India? | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
| If men be worlds, there is in every one | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Some thing to answere in some proportion | 10 | ·······˘/˘ |
| All the worlds riches: And in good men, this, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Vertue, our formes forme and our soules soule, is. | 11 | ··/·/˘·/··· |
| Kindly I envy thy songs perfection | 10 | /˘·/˘··˘/˘ |
| Built of all th'elements as our bodyes are: | 11 | ·······//˘· |
| That Litle of earth that is in it, is a faire | 12 | ·/˘········· |
| Delicious garden where all sweetes are sowne. | 10 | ˘/˘/˘····· |
| In it is cherishing fyer which dryes in mee | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Griefe which did drowne me: and halfe quench'd by it | 10 | ·········· |
| Are satirique fyres which urg'd me to have writt | 11 | ··········· |
| In skorne of all: for now I admyre thee. | 10 | ·········· |
| And as Ayre doth fullfill the hollownes | 9 | ········· |
| Of rotten walls; so it myne emptines, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Where tost and mov'd it did beget this sound | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| Which as a lame Eccho of thyne doth rebound. | 11 | ·········˘/ |
| Oh, I was dead; but since thy song new Life did give, | 12 | ············ |
| I recreated, even by thy creature, live. | 11 | ·/˘·˘/··/˘· |
Notes from the edition 7
Herbert Grierson's record of the readings of the early editions and manuscripts, from his Poems of John Donne (Oxford, 1912; Project Gutenberg #48688).
- Stanza 1, line 3 brother 1633-69, A18, N, O'F, TC: brethren W
- Stanza 1, line 6 hand,] hands O'F, TC
- Stanza 1, line 13 Oh, ... give, ... recreated, ... creature,] no commas, W
- Stanza 2, line 7 in: 1650-69, W: in, 1633-39
- Stanza 2, line 13 all th'All W: All th'All 1633-69
- Stanza 3, line 3 men, this, Ed: men, this 1633-69
- Stanza 3, line 4 soules soule, is. Chambers: soules soule is. 1633-69
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