Success

Emily Dickinson (1830–1886) · 1890–1896

common measure · 12 lines · from Poems

Success is counted sweetestBy those who ne'er succeed.To comprehend a nectarRequires sorest need.

Not one of all the purple hostWho took the flag to-dayCan tell the definition,So clear, of victory,

As he, defeated, dying,On whose forbidden earThe distant strains of triumphBreak, agonized and clear!

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Success is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems by Emily Dickinson, Three Series, Complete, Project Gutenberg ebook #12242; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Emily Dickinson, Success, in Poems (1890–1896), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #12242, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/dickinson-poems/success.html, id L18882.

Form and metre

Success is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 6.6 syllables. 357 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 28% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A sweetest · succeedA · nectar · needA
  2. 3 -A-A dying · earA · triumph · clearA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Success is counted sweetest7˘/·/˘/˘
By those who ne'er succeed.6····˘/
To comprehend a nectar7··˘/·/˘
Requires sorest need.6˘/˘···
Not one of all the purple host8·····/˘·
Who took the flag to-day6······
Can tell the definition,7····˘/˘
So clear, of victory,6···/˘˘
As he, defeated, dying,7··˘/˘/˘
On whose forbidden ear6··˘/˘·
The distant strains of triumph7·/˘··/˘
Break, agonized and clear!6·/˘···

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