The Song of the Secret

Walter de la Mare (1873–1956) · 1913

iambic trimeter · 17 lines · from Peacock Pie

Where is beauty?Gone, gone:The cold winds have taken itWith their faint moan;The white stars have shaken it,Trembling down,Into the pathless deeps of the sea.Gone, goneIs beauty from me.

The clear naked flowerIs faded and dead;The green-leafed willow,Drooping her head,Whispers low to the shadeOf her boughs in the stream,Sighing a beauty,Secret as dream.

Words in this poem

pathless a.
Having no beaten path or way; untrodden; impenetrable; as, pathless woods.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Song of the Secret is in the public domain. This text is taken from Peacock Pie, a Book of Rhymes, Project Gutenberg ebook #3753; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Walter de la Mare, The Song of the Secret, in Peacock Pie (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3753, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/de-la-mare-peacock-pie/the-song-of-the-secret.html, id L12629.

Form and metre

The Song of the Secret is 17 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 81%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.1 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AB-B-CAC beauty · goneA · itB · moan · itB · down · seaC · goneA · meC
  2. 2 -A-A-B-B flower · deadA · willow · headA · shade · streamB · beauty · dreamB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Where is beauty?4··/˘
Gone, gone:2··
The cold winds have taken it7····/˘·
With their faint moan;4····
The white stars have shaken it,7····/˘·
Trembling down,4/˘˘·
Into the pathless deeps of the sea.9···/˘····
Gone, gone2··
Is beauty from me.5·/˘··
The clear naked flower6··/˘/˘
Is faded and dead;5·/˘··
The green-leafed willow,6···˘/·
Drooping her head,4/˘··
Whispers low to the shade6/˘····
Of her boughs in the stream,6······
Sighing a beauty,5/˘·/˘
Secret as dream.4/˘··

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