Mrs. MacQueen (or the Lollie-Shop)

Walter de la Mare (1873–1956) · 1913

short measure · 20 lines · from Peacock Pie

With glass like a bull's-eye,And shutters of green,Down on the cobblesLives Mrs. MacQueen,

At six she rises;At nine you seeHer candle shine outIn the linden tree:

And at half-past nineNot a sound is nighBut the bright moon's creepingAcross the sky;

Or a far dog baying;Or a twittering birdIn its drowsy nest,In the darkness stirred;

Or like the roarOf a distant seaA long-drawn S-s-shIn the linden tree.

Words in this poem

twittering n.
The act of one who, or that which, twitters.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Mrs. MacQueen (or the Lollie-Shop) is in the public domain. This text is taken from Peacock Pie, a Book of Rhymes, Project Gutenberg ebook #3753; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Walter de la Mare, Mrs. MacQueen (or the Lollie-Shop), in Peacock Pie (1913), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #3753, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/de-la-mare-peacock-pie/mrs-macqueen-or-the-lollie-shop.html, id L18585.

Form and metre

Mrs. MacQueen (or the Lollie-Shop) is 20 lines in 5 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is short measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.2 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 50% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A eye · greenA · cobbles · macqueenA
  2. 2 -A-A rises · seeA · out · treeA
  3. 3 -A-A nine · nighA · creeping · skyA
  4. 4 -A-A baying · birdA · nest · stirredA
  5. 5 -A-A roar · seaA · — · treeA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against short measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
With glass like a bull's-eye,6······
And shutters of green,5·/˘··
Down on the cobbles5···/˘
Lives Mrs. MacQueen,5·/˘˘/
At six she rises;5···/˘
At nine you see4····
Her candle shine out5·/˘··
In the linden tree:5··/˘·
And at half-past nine5·····
Not a sound is nigh5·····
But the bright moon's creeping6····/˘
Across the sky;4˘/··
Or a far dog baying;6····/˘
Or a twittering bird6··/˘˘·
In its drowsy nest,5··/˘·
In the darkness stirred;6··/˘·˘
Or like the roar4····
Of a distant sea5··/˘·
A long-drawn S-s-sh7·····//
In the linden tree.5··/˘·

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