Objection
For what, say they, doth not the Soule waxe old?How comes it then that agèd men doe dote;And that their braines grow sottish, dull and cold,Which were in youth the onely spirits of note?
What? are not Soules within themselues corrupted?How can there idiots then by nature bee?How is it that some wits are interrupted,That now they dazeled are, now clearely see?
Yet say these men, If all her organs die,Then hath the soule no power her powers to vse;So, in a sort, her powers extinct doe lie,When vnto act shee cannot them reduce.
And if her powers be dead, then what is shee?For sith from euery thing some powers do spring,And from those powers, some acts proceeding bee,Then kill both power and act, and kill the thing.
But how, till then, shall she herselfe imploy?Her spies are dead which brought home newes before;What she hath got and keepes, she may enioy,But she hath meanes to vnderstand no more.
Then what do those poore soules, which nothing get?Or what doe those which get, and cannot keepe?Like buckets bottomlesse, which all out-letThose Soules, for want of exercise, must sleepe.
But still this crue with questions me pursues:If soules deceas'd (say they) still liuing bee;Why do they not return, to bring vs newesOf that strange world, where they such wonders see?
'Tell us, ye dead, will none of you in pity,To those you left behind, disclose the secret?
Oh! that some courteous ghost would blab it out;What 'tis you are, and we must shortly be.'
Well, well, say these vaine spirits, though vaine it isTo thinke our Soules to Heauen or Hell to goe,Politike men haue thought it not amisse,To spread this lye, to make men vertuous so.
Words in this poem
- dote n.
- A marriage portion. See 1st Dot, n. Wyatt. [See Dot dowry.]
- sottish a.
- Like a sot; doltish; very foolish; drunken. [From Sot.]
- sith prep.
- Since; afterwards; seeing that. [See Since.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- ghost n.
- The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
- blab v. t.
- To utter or tell unnecessarily, or in a thoughtless manner; to publish (secrets or trifles) without reserve or discretion. Udall. [Cf. OE. blaberen, or Dan. blabbre, G. plappern, Gael. blabaran a stammerer; prob. of imitative origin. Cf. also Blubber, v.]
- shortly adv.
- In a short or brief time or manner; soon; quickly. [AS. sceortlice.]
- vertuous a.
- Virtuous; powerful.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
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Form and metre
Objection is 36 lines in 10 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 5 of its 10 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 85%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.2 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 8% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB oldA · doteB · coldA · noteB
- 2 ABAB corruptedA · beeB · interruptedA · seeB
- 3 A-A- dieA · vse · lieA · reduce
- 4 ABAB sheeA · springB · beeA · thingB
- 5 -A-A imploy · beforeA · enioy · moreA
- 6 ABAB getA · keepeB · letA · sleepeB
- 7 ABAB pursuesA · beeB · newesA · seeB
- 10 -A-A is · goeA · amisse · soA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| For what, say they, doth not the Soule waxe old? | 10 | ·········· |
| How comes it then that agèd men doe dote; | 9 | ········· |
| And that their braines grow sottish, dull and cold, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Which were in youth the onely spirits of note? | 11 | ·····/˘/˘·· |
| What? are not Soules within themselues corrupted? | 11 | ········˘/˘ |
| How can there idiots then by nature bee? | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| How is it that some wits are interrupted, | 11 | ········˘/˘ |
| That now they dazeled are, now clearely see? | 11 | ··········· |
| Yet say these men, If all her organs die, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Then hath the soule no power her powers to vse; | 10 | ·····/·/·· |
| So, in a sort, her powers extinct doe lie, | 10 | ·····/˘/·· |
| When vnto act shee cannot them reduce. | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| And if her powers be dead, then what is shee? | 10 | ···/······ |
| For sith from euery thing some powers do spring, | 10 | ·······/·· |
| And from those powers, some acts proceeding bee, | 10 | ···/··˘/˘· |
| Then kill both power and act, and kill the thing. | 10 | ···/······ |
| But how, till then, shall she herselfe imploy? | 10 | ·········· |
| Her spies are dead which brought home newes before; | 10 | ·········· |
| What she hath got and keepes, she may enioy, | 10 | ·········· |
| But she hath meanes to vnderstand no more. | 9 | ········· |
| Then what do those poore soules, which nothing get? | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Or what doe those which get, and cannot keepe? | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Like buckets bottomlesse, which all out-let | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Those Soules, for want of exercise, must sleepe. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| But still this crue with questions me pursues: | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| If soules deceas'd (say they) still liuing bee; | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| Why do they not return, to bring vs newes | 11 | ····˘/··//· |
| Of that strange world, where they such wonders see? | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| 'Tell us, ye dead, will none of you in pity, | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| To those you left behind, disclose the secret? | 11 | ······˘/·/˘ |
| Oh! that some courteous ghost would blab it out; | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| What 'tis you are, and we must shortly be.' | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Well, well, say these vaine spirits, though vaine it is | 11 | ·····/˘···· |
| To thinke our Soules to Heauen or Hell to goe, | 10 | ··/······· |
| Politike men haue thought it not amisse, | 10 | ········/˘ |
| To spread this lye, to make men vertuous so. | 11 | ·······/˘˘· |
Notes from the edition 3
A. B. Grosart's notes to the Complete Poems of Sir John Davies (Project Gutenberg #44977).
- Stanza 6, line 3 Davies and Southey, as before, oddly misprint 'bucklers.' G.
- Stanza 7, line 4 'Tell us, ye dead, will none of you in pity, To those you left behind, disclose the secret? Oh! that some courteous ghost would blab it out; What 'tis you are, and we must shortly be.' ROBERT BLAIR: 'The Grave.' G.
- Stanza 10, line 2 In 1599 and 1608 editions, 'do.' G.
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