Part I

Isabella Valancy Crawford (1850–1887) · 1884

iambic pentameter · unrhymed · 145 lines · from Old Spookses' Pass, Malcolm's Katie and Other Poems

Max plac'd a ring on little Katie's hand,A silver ring that he had beaten outFrom that same sacred coin--first well-priz'd wageFor boyish labour, kept thro' many years."See, Kate," he said, "I had no skill to shapeTwo hearts fast bound together, so I grav'dJust K. and M., for Katie and for Max.""But, look; you've run the lines in such a way,That M. is part of K., and K. of M.,"Said Katie, smiling. "Did you mean it thus?I like it better than the double hearts.""Well, well," he said, "but womankind is wise!Yet tell me, dear, will such a prophecyNot hurt you sometimes, when I am away?Will you not seek, keen ey'd, for some small breakIn those deep lines, to part the K. and M.For you? Nay, Kate, look down amid the globesOf those large lilies that our light canoeDivides, and see within the polish'd poolThat small, rose face of yours,--so dear, so fair,--A seed of love to cleave into a rock,And bourgeon thence until the granite splitsBefore its subtle strength. I being gone--Poor soldier of the axe--to bloodless fields,(Inglorious battles, whether lost or won).That sixteen summer'd heart of yours may say:"'I but was budding, and I did not knowMy core was crimson and my perfume sweet;I did not know how choice a thing I am;I had not seen the sun, and blind I sway'dTo a strong wind, and thought because I sway'd,'Twas to the wooer of the perfect rose--That strong, wild wind has swept beyond my ken--The breeze I love sighs thro' my ruddy leaves.""O, words!" said Katie, blushing, "only words!You build them up that I may push them down;If hearts are flow'rs, I know that flow'rs can root--"Bud, blossom, die--all in the same lov'd soil;They do so in my garden. I have madeYour heart my garden. If I am a budAnd only feel unfoldment--feebly stirWithin my leaves: wait patiently; some June,I'll blush a full-blown rose, and queen it, dear,In your lov'd garden. Tho' I be a bud,My roots strike deep, and torn from that dear soilWould shriek like mandrakes--those witch things I readOf in your quaint old books. Are you content?""Yes--crescent-wise--but not to round, full moon.Look at yon hill that rounds so gently upFrom the wide lake; a lover king it looks,In cloth of gold, gone from his bride and queen;And yet delayed, because her silver locksCatch in his gilded fringes; his shoulders sweepInto blue distance, and his gracious crest,Not held too high, is plum'd with maple groves;--One of your father's farms. A mighty man,Self-hewn from rock, remaining rock through all.""He loves me, Max," said Katie: "Yes, I know--A rock is cup to many a crystal spring.Well, he is rich; those misty, peak-roof'd barns--Leviathans rising from red seas of grain--Are full of ingots, shaped like grains of wheat.His flocks have golden fleeces, and his herdsHave monarchs worshipful, as was the calfAaron call'd from the furnace; and his ploughs,Like Genii chained, snort o'er his mighty fields.He has a voice in Council and in Church--""He work'd for all," said Katie, somewhat pain'd."Aye, so, dear love, he did; I heard him tellHow the first field upon his farm was ploughed.He and his brother Reuben, stalwart lads,Yok'd themselves, side by side, to the new plough;Their weaker father, in the grey of life(But rather the wan age of povertyThan many winters), in large, gnarl'd handsThe plunging handles held; with mighty strainsThey drew the ripping beak through knotted sod,Thro' tortuous lanes of blacken'd, smoking stumps;And past great flaming brush heaps, sending outFierce summers, beating on their swollen brows.O, such a battle! had we heard of serfsDriven to like hot conflict with the soil,Armies had march'd and navies swiftly sail'dTo burst their gyves. But here's the little point--The polish'd di'mond pivot on which spinsThe wheel of Difference--they OWN'D the rugged soil,And fought for love--dear love of wealth and pow'r,And honest ease and fair esteem of men;One's blood heats at it!" "Yet you said such fieldsWere all inglorious," Katie, wondering, said."Inglorious? yes; they make no promisesOf Star or Garter, or the thundering gunsThat tell the earth her warriors are dead.Inglorious! aye, the battle done and wonMeans not--a throne propp'd up with bleaching bones;A country sav'd with smoking seas of blood;A flag torn from the foe with wounds and death;Or Commerce, with her housewife foot uponColossal bridge of slaughter'd savages,The Cross laid on her brawny shoulder, andIn one sly, mighty hand her reeking sword;And in the other all the woven cheatsFrom her dishonest looms. Nay, none of these.It means--four walls, perhaps a lowly roof;Kine in a peaceful posture; modest fields;A man and woman standing hand in handIn hale old age, who, looking o'er the land,Say: 'Thank the Lord, it all is mine and thine!'It means, to such thew'd warriors of the AxeAs your own father;--well, it means, sweet Kate,Outspreading circles of increasing gold,A name of weight; one little daughter heir.Who must not wed the owner of an axe,Who owns naught else but some dim, dusky woodsIn a far land; two arms indifferent strong--""And Katie's heart," said Katie, with a smile;For yet she stood on that smooth, violet plain,Where nothing shades the sun; nor quite believedThose blue peaks closing in were aught but mistWhich the gay sun could scatter with a glance.For Max, he late had touch'd their stones, but yetHe saw them seam'd with gold and precious ores,Rich with hill flow'rs and musical with rills."Or that same bud that will be Katie's heart,Against the time your deep, dim woods are clear'd,And I have wrought my father to relent.""How will you move him, sweet? why, he will rageAnd fume and anger, striding o'er his fields,Until the last bought king of herds lets downHis lordly front, and rumbling thunder fromHis polish'd chest, returns his chiding tones.How will you move him, Katie, tell me how?""I'll kiss him and keep still--that way is sure,"Said Katie, smiling. "I have often tried.""God speed the kiss," said Max, and Katie sigh'd,With pray'rful palms close seal'd, "God speed the axe!"

O, light canoe, where dost thou glide?Below thee gleams no silver'd tide,But concave heaven's chiefest pride.

Above thee burns Eve's rosy bar;Below thee throbs her darling star;Deep 'neath thy keel her round worlds are!

Above, below, O sweet surprise,To gladden happy lover's eyes;No earth, no wave--all jewell'd sides!

Words in this poem 24
wage v. i.
To bind one's self; to engage.
boyish a.
Resembling a boy in a manners or opinions; belonging to a boy; childish; trifling; puerile.
kate n.
The brambling finch.
womankind n.
The females of the human race; women, collectively.
amid prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
bourgeon v. i.
To sprout; to put forth buds; to shoot forth, as a branch. [OE. burjoun a bud, burjounen to bud, F. bourgeon a bud, bourgeonner to bud; cf. OHG. burjan to raise.]
inglorious a.
Not glorious; not bringing honor or glory; not accompanied with fame, honor, or celebrity; obscure; humble; as, an inglorious life of ease. [L. inglorious; pref. in- not + gloria glory, fame: cf. F. inglorieux. See Glory.]
wooer n.
One who wooes; one who courts or solicits in love; a suitor. [AS. wogere. See Woo, v. t.]
patiently adv.
In a patient manner.
quaint a.
Prudent; wise; hence, crafty; artful; wily. [OE. queint, queynte, coint, prudent, wise, cunning, pretty, odd, OF. cointe cultivated, amiable, agreeable, neat, fr. L. cognitus known, p. p. of cognoscere to ]
worshipful a.
Entitled to worship, reverence, or high respect; claiming respect; worthy of honor; -- often used as a term of respect, sometimes ironically.
stalwart a.
Brave; bold; strong; redoubted; daring; vehement; violent. [OE. stalworth, AS. stælwyrth serviceable, probably originally, good at stealing, or worth stealing or taking, and afterwards extended to other causes of estimat]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
garter n.
A band used to prevent a stocking from slipping down on the leg. [OE. gartier, F. jarretière, fr. OF. garet bend of the knee, F. jarret; akin to Sp. garra claw, Prov. garra leg. See Garrote.]
thundering a.
Emitting thunder.
colossal a.
Of enormous size; gigantic; huge; as, a colossal statue. [Cf. F. cossal, L. colosseus. See Colossus.]
brawny a.
Having large, strong muscles; muscular; fleshy; strong.
dishonest a.
Dishonorable; shameful; indecent; unchaste; lewd. [Pref. dis- + honest: cf. F. déshonnête, OF. deshoneste.]
aught n.
Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
relent v. i.
To become less rigid or hard; to yield; to dissolve; to melt; to deliquesce. [F. ralentir, fr. L. pref. re- re- + ad to + lentus pliant, flexible, slow. See Lithe.]
fume n.
Exhalation; volatile matter (esp. noxious vapor or smoke) ascending in a dense body; smoke; vapor; reek; as, the fumes of tobacco. [L. fumus; akin to Skr. dh smoke, dh to shake, fan a flame, cf. Gr. fum smoke, F. fumée. Cf. Dust, n., Femerell, Thyme.]
rumbling
a. & n. from Rumble, v. i.
chiefest a.
First or foremost; chief; principal. [Superl. of Chief.]
gladden v. t.
To make glad; to cheer; to please; to gratify; to rejoice; to exhilarate. [See Glad, v. t.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Part I is in the public domain. This text is taken from Old Spookses' Pass, Malcolm's Katie, and other poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #6815; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Part I is 145 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 98% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.8 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 32% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

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  1. 1 -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A--A-----B---B--CC--------------------------DD- hand · out · wage · years · shape · grav'd · max · way · m · thus · hearts · wise · prophecy · away · break · m · globes · canoe · pool · fair · rock · splits · gone · fields · won · say · know · sweet · am · sway'd · sway'd · rose · ken · leaves · words · down · root · soil · made · bud · stir · june · dear · bud · soil · read · content · moon · up · looks · queen · locks · sweep · crest · groves · man · all · know · spring · barns · grain · wheat · herds · calf · ploughs · fields · church · pain'd · tell · ploughed · lads · plough · life · poverty · hands · strains · sod · stumps · out · brows · serfs · soil · sail'd · point · spins · soil · pow'r · men · fields · saidA · promises · guns · deadA · won · bones · blood · death · upon · savagesB · and · sword · cheats · theseB · roof · fields · handC · landC · thine · axe · kate · gold · heir · axe · woods · strong · smile · plain · believed · mist · glance · yet · ores · rills · heart · clear'd · relent · rage · fields · down · from · tones · how · sure · triedD · sigh'dD · axe
  2. 2 AAA glideA · tideA · prideA
  3. 3 AAA barA · starA · areA
  4. 4 AA- surpriseA · eyesA · sides
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Max plac'd a ring on little Katie's hand,10·····/˘/˘·
A silver ring that he had beaten out10·/˘····/˘·
From that same sacred coin--first well-priz'd wage10···/˘·····
For boyish labour, kept thro' many years.9·/˘/···/·
"See, Kate," he said, "I had no skill to shape10··········
Two hearts fast bound together, so I grav'd10····˘/˘···
Just K. and M., for Katie and for Max."10·····/˘···
"But, look; you've run the lines in such a way,10··········
That M. is part of K., and K. of M.,"10··········
Said Katie, smiling. "Did you mean it thus?10·/˘/˘·····
I like it better than the double hearts."10···/˘··/˘·
"Well, well," he said, "but womankind is wise!10·····/˘˘··
Yet tell me, dear, will such a prophecy9·······/˘
Not hurt you sometimes, when I am away?10···/····˘/
Will you not seek, keen ey'd, for some small break10··········
In those deep lines, to part the K. and M.10··········
For you? Nay, Kate, look down amid the globes10······˘/··
Of those large lilies that our light canoe10···/˘·/·˘/
Divides, and see within the polish'd pool10˘/·····/˘·
That small, rose face of yours,--so dear, so fair,--10··········
A seed of love to cleave into a rock,10··········
And bourgeon thence until the granite splits10·/˘····/˘·
Before its subtle strength. I being gone--9···/˘··/·
Poor soldier of the axe--to bloodless fields,10·/˘····/˘·
(Inglorious battles, whether lost or won).10˘/˘/˘·····
That sixteen summer'd heart of yours may say:10·˘/·······
"'I but was budding, and I did not know10···/˘·····
My core was crimson and my perfume sweet;10···/˘··˘/·
I did not know how choice a thing I am;10··········
I had not seen the sun, and blind I sway'd10··········
To a strong wind, and thought because I sway'd,10··········
'Twas to the wooer of the perfect rose--10···/˘··/··
That strong, wild wind has swept beyond my ken--10··········
The breeze I love sighs thro' my ruddy leaves."10·······/˘·
"O, words!" said Katie, blushing, "only words!10···/˘/˘/˘·
You build them up that I may push them down;10··········
If hearts are flow'rs, I know that flow'rs can root--10··········
"Bud, blossom, die--all in the same lov'd soil;10·/˘·······
They do so in my garden. I have made10·····/˘···
Your heart my garden. If I am a bud10···/˘·····
And only feel unfoldment--feebly stir10·/˘·˘/˘/˘·
Within my leaves: wait patiently; some June,9·····/˘··
I'll blush a full-blown rose, and queen it, dear,10··········
In your lov'd garden. Tho' I be a bud,10···/˘·····
My roots strike deep, and torn from that dear soil10··········
Would shriek like mandrakes--those witch things I read10···/······
Of in your quaint old books. Are you content?"10········/˘
"Yes--crescent-wise--but not to round, full moon.10·/˘·······
Look at yon hill that rounds so gently up10·······/˘·
From the wide lake; a lover king it looks,10·····/˘···
In cloth of gold, gone from his bride and queen;10··········
And yet delayed, because her silver locks10··˘/···/˘·
Catch in his gilded fringes; his shoulders sweep11···/˘/˘·/˘·
Into blue distance, and his gracious crest,10···/˘··/˘·
Not held too high, is plum'd with maple groves;--10·······/˘·
One of your father's farms. A mighty man,10···/˘··/˘·
Self-hewn from rock, remaining rock through all."10····˘/˘···
"He loves me, Max," said Katie: "Yes, I know--10·····/˘···
A rock is cup to many a crystal spring.10·····/·/˘·
Well, he is rich; those misty, peak-roof'd barns--10·····/˘···
Leviathans rising from red seas of grain--10˘/˘/˘·····
Are full of ingots, shaped like grains of wheat.10···/˘·····
His flocks have golden fleeces, and his herds10···/˘/˘···
Have monarchs worshipful, as was the calf9·/·/˘····
Aaron call'd from the furnace; and his ploughs,10/˘···/˘···
Like Genii chained, snort o'er his mighty fields.10·······/˘·
He has a voice in Council and in Church--"10·····/˘···
"He work'd for all," said Katie, somewhat pain'd.10·····/˘//·
"Aye, so, dear love, he did; I heard him tell10··········
How the first field upon his farm was ploughed.10··········
He and his brother Reuben, stalwart lads,10···/˘/˘/˘·
Yok'd themselves, side by side, to the new plough;10·˘/·······
Their weaker father, in the grey of life10·/˘/˘·····
(But rather the wan age of poverty9·/˘····/˘
Than many winters), in large, gnarl'd hands8·//˘····
The plunging handles held; with mighty strains10·/˘/˘··/˘·
They drew the ripping beak through knotted sod,10···/˘··/˘·
Thro' tortuous lanes of blacken'd, smoking stumps;10·/˘··/˘/˘·
And past great flaming brush heaps, sending out10···/˘··/˘·
Fierce summers, beating on their swollen brows.10·/˘/˘··/˘·
O, such a battle! had we heard of serfs10···/˘·····
Driven to like hot conflict with the soil,9/···/˘···
Armies had march'd and navies swiftly sail'd10/˘···/˘/˘·
To burst their gyves. But here's the little point--10·······/˘·
The polish'd di'mond pivot on which spins10·/˘/˘/˘···
The wheel of Difference--they OWN'D the rugged soil,11···/˘···/˘·
And fought for love--dear love of wealth and pow'r,10··········
And honest ease and fair esteem of men;10·/˘···˘/··
One's blood heats at it!" "Yet you said such fields10··········
Were all inglorious," Katie, wondering, said.10··˘/˘/˘/˘·
"Inglorious? yes; they make no promises9˘/˘····/˘
Of Star or Garter, or the thundering guns10···/˘··/˘·
That tell the earth her warriors are dead.9·····/˘··
Inglorious! aye, the battle done and won10˘/˘··/˘···
Means not--a throne propp'd up with bleaching bones;10·······/˘·
A country sav'd with smoking seas of blood;10·/˘··/˘···
A flag torn from the foe with wounds and death;10··········
Or Commerce, with her housewife foot upon10·/˘··/····
Colossal bridge of slaughter'd savages,9˘/˘··/˘/˘
The Cross laid on her brawny shoulder, and10·····/˘/˘·
In one sly, mighty hand her reeking sword;10···/˘··/˘·
And in the other all the woven cheats10···/˘··/˘·
From her dishonest looms. Nay, none of these.10··˘/˘·····
It means--four walls, perhaps a lowly roof;10····˘/·/˘·
Kine in a peaceful posture; modest fields;10···/˘/˘/˘·
A man and woman standing hand in hand10···/˘/˘···
In hale old age, who, looking o'er the land,10·····/˘···
Say: 'Thank the Lord, it all is mine and thine!'10··········
It means, to such thew'd warriors of the Axe10·····/˘···
As your own father;--well, it means, sweet Kate,10···/˘·····
Outspreading circles of increasing gold,10···/˘·˘/˘·
A name of weight; one little daughter heir.10·····/˘/˘·
Who must not wed the owner of an axe,10·····/˘···
Who owns naught else but some dim, dusky woods10·······/˘·
In a far land; two arms indifferent strong--"10······˘/˘·
"And Katie's heart," said Katie, with a smile;10·/˘··/˘···
For yet she stood on that smooth, violet plain,10·······/˘·
Where nothing shades the sun; nor quite believed10·/˘·····˘/
Those blue peaks closing in were aught but mist10···/˘·····
Which the gay sun could scatter with a glance.10·····/˘···
For Max, he late had touch'd their stones, but yet10··········
He saw them seam'd with gold and precious ores,10·······/˘·
Rich with hill flow'rs and musical with rills.9·····/˘··
"Or that same bud that will be Katie's heart,10·······/˘·
Against the time your deep, dim woods are clear'd,10··········
And I have wrought my father to relent."10·····/˘·˘/
"How will you move him, sweet? why, he will rage10··········
And fume and anger, striding o'er his fields,10···/˘/˘···
Until the last bought king of herds lets down10··········
His lordly front, and rumbling thunder from10·/˘··/˘/˘·
His polish'd chest, returns his chiding tones.10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
How will you move him, Katie, tell me how?"10·····/˘···
"I'll kiss him and keep still--that way is sure,"10··········
Said Katie, smiling. "I have often tried."10·/˘/˘··/˘·
"God speed the kiss," said Max, and Katie sigh'd,10·······/˘·
With pray'rful palms close seal'd, "God speed the axe!"10··········
O, light canoe, where dost thou glide?8··˘/····
Below thee gleams no silver'd tide,8········
But concave heaven's chiefest pride.8·/˘/˘/˘·
Above thee burns Eve's rosy bar;8·····/˘·
Below thee throbs her darling star;8·····/˘·
Deep 'neath thy keel her round worlds are!8········
Above, below, O sweet surprise,8······˘/
To gladden happy lover's eyes;8·/˘/˘/˘·
No earth, no wave--all jewell'd sides!8········

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