The First Elegie

Richard Crashaw (c. 1613–1649) · 1646–1652

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 38 lines · from Steps to the Temple and Other Poems

I late the Roman youth's loud prayse and pride,Whom long none could obtain, though thousands try'd;Lo, here am left (alas!) For my lost mateT' embrace my teares, and kisse an vnkind fate.Sure in my early woes starres were at strife,And try'd to make a widow ere a wife.Nor can I tell (and this new teares doth breed)In what strange path, my lord's fair footsteppes bleed.O knew I where he wander'd, I should seeSome solace in my sorrow's certainty:I'd send my woes in words should weep for me,(Who knowes how powerfull well-writt praires would be.)Sending's too slow a word; myselfe would fly.Who knowes my own heart's woes so well as I?But how shall I steal hence? Alexis thou,Ah thou thy self, alas! hast taught me how.Loue too that leads the way would lend the wingsTo bear me harmlesse through the hardest things.And where Loue lends the wing, and leads the way,What dangers can there be dare say me nay?If I be shipwrack't, Loue shall teach to swimme:If drown'd, sweet is the death indur'd for him:The noted sea shall change his name with me,I'mongst the blest starres, a new name shall be.And sure where louers make their watry graues,The weeping mariner will augment the waues.For who so hard, but passing by that wayWill take acquaintance of my woes, and sayHere 'twas the Roman maid found a hard fate,While through the World she sought her wandring mateHere perish't she, poor heart; Heauns, be my vowesAs true to me, as she was to her spouse.O liue, so rare a loue! liue! and in theeThe too frail life of femal constancy.Farewell; and shine, fair soul, shine there aboueFirm in thy crown, as here fast in thy loue.There thy lost fugitiue th' hast found at last:Be happy; and for euer hold him fast.

Words in this poem

strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
solace n.
Comfort in grief; alleviation of grief or anxiety; also, that which relieves in distress; that which cheers or consoles; relief. [OF. solas, ssoulaz, L. solacium, solatium, fr. solari to comfort, console. Cf. Console, v. t.]
writt
3d pers. sing. pres. of Write, for writeth.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
swimme v. i.
To be supported by water or other fluid; not to sink; to float; as, any substance will swim, whose specific gravity is less than that of the fluid in which it is immersed. [AS. swimman; akin to D. zwemmen, OHG. swimman, G. schwimmen, Icel. svimma, Dan. swömme, Sw. simma. Cf. Sound an air bladder, a strait.]
spouse v. t.
To wed; to espouse. [See Espouse, and Spouse, n.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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The First Elegie is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Complete Works of Richard Crashaw, Volume I, Project Gutenberg ebook #38549; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The First Elegie is 38 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 79% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 84%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --AABBCCD-DDDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL----MMNN pride · try'd · mateA · fateA · strifeB · wifeB · breedC · bleedC · seeD · certainty · meD · beD · flyD · iD · thouE · howE · wingsF · thingsF · wayG · nayG · swimmeH · himH · meI · beI · grauesJ · wauesJ · wayK · sayK · fateL · mateL · vowes · spouse · thee · constancy · aboueM · loueM · lastN · fastN
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I late the Roman youth's loud prayse and pride,10···/˘·····
Whom long none could obtain, though thousands try'd;10····˘/·/˘·
Lo, here am left (alas!) For my lost mate10····˘/····
T' embrace my teares, and kisse an vnkind fate.10·˘/·······
Sure in my early woes starres were at strife,10···/˘·····
And try'd to make a widow ere a wife.10·····/˘···
Nor can I tell (and this new teares doth breed)10··········
In what strange path, my lord's fair footsteppes bleed.10·······/··
O knew I where he wander'd, I should see10·····/˘···
Some solace in my sorrow's certainty:10·/˘··/˘/˘˘
I'd send my woes in words should weep for me,10··········
(Who knowes how powerfull well-writt praires would be.)10···/˘·····
Sending's too slow a word; myselfe would fly.10/˘········
Who knowes my own heart's woes so well as I?10··········
But how shall I steal hence? Alexis thou,10······˘/˘·
Ah thou thy self, alas! hast taught me how.10····˘/····
Loue too that leads the way would lend the wings10··········
To bear me harmlesse through the hardest things.10·······/˘·
And where Loue lends the wing, and leads the way,10··········
What dangers can there be dare say me nay?10·/˘·······
If I be shipwrack't, Loue shall teach to swimme:10··········
If drown'd, sweet is the death indur'd for him:10··········
The noted sea shall change his name with me,10·/˘·······
I'mongst the blest starres, a new name shall be.10··········
And sure where louers make their watry graues,9······/˘·
The weeping mariner will augment the waues.10·/˘/˘·˘/··
For who so hard, but passing by that way10·····/˘···
Will take acquaintance of my woes, and say10··˘/˘·····
Here 'twas the Roman maid found a hard fate,10···/˘·····
While through the World she sought her wandring mate10·······/˘·
Here perish't she, poor heart; Heauns, be my vowes10··········
As true to me, as she was to her spouse.10··········
O liue, so rare a loue! liue! and in thee10··········
The too frail life of femal constancy.10·······/˘˘
Farewell; and shine, fair soul, shine there aboue9·/·······
Firm in thy crown, as here fast in thy loue.10··········
There thy lost fugitiue th' hast found at last:9·········
Be happy; and for euer hold him fast.9·/˘······

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