Just Beyond

Susan Coolidge (1835–1905) · 1889

iambic pentameter · 40 lines · from A Few More Verses

WHEN out of the body the soul is sent,As a bird speeds forth from the opened tent,As the smoke flies out when it finds a vent,To lose itself in the spending,—

Does it travel wide, does it travel far,To find the place where all spirits are?Does it measure long leagues from star to star,And feel its travel unending?

And caught by each baffling, blowing wind,Storm-tossed and beaten, before, behind,Till the courage fails and the sight is blind,Must it go in search of its heaven?

I do not think that it can be so;For weary is life, as all men know,And battling and struggling to and froMan goes from his morn to his even.

And surely this is enough to bear,—The long day’s work in the sun’s hot glare,The doubt and the loss which breed despair,The anguish of baffled hoping.

And when the end of it all has come,And the soul has won the right to its home,I do not believe it must wander and roamThrough the infinite spaces groping.

No; wild may the storm be, and dark the day,And the shuddering soul may clasp its clay,Afraid to go and unwilling to stay;But when it girds it for going,

With a rapture of sudden consciousness,I think it awakes to a knowledge of this,That heaven earth’s closest neighbor is,And only waits for our knowing;

That ’tis but a step from dark to day,From the worn-out tent and the burial clay,To the rapture of youth renewed for aye,And the smile of the saints uprisen;

And that just where the soul, perplexed and awed,Begins its journey, it meets the Lord,And finds that heaven and the great rewardLay just outside of its prison!

Words in this poem

spending n.
The act of expending; expenditure. Spending money, money set apart for extra (not necessary) personal expenses; pocket money.
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
burial n.
A grave; a tomb; a place of sepulture. [OE. buriel, buriels, grave, tomb, AS. byrgels, fr. byrgan to bury, and akin to OS. burgisli sepulcher.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Just Beyond is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Few More Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #49518; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Susan Coolidge, Just Beyond, in A Few More Verses (1889), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #49518, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/coolidge-few-more-verses/just-beyond.html, id L23471.

Form and metre

Just Beyond is 40 lines in 10 stanzas of 4 lines each. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 74%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AAAB sentA · tentA · ventA · spendingB
  2. 2 CCCB farC · areC · starC · unendingB
  3. 3 DDD- windD · behindD · blindD · heaven
  4. 4 EEE- soE · knowE · froE · even
  5. 5 FFFG bearF · glareF · despairF · hopingG
  6. 6 -HHG come · homeH · roamH · gropingG
  7. 7 IIIJ dayI · clayI · stayI · goingJ
  8. 8 ---J consciousness · this · is · knowingJ
  9. 9 II-K dayI · clayI · aye · uprisenK
  10. 10 -LLK awed · lordL · rewardL · prisonK
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
WHEN out of the body the soul is sent,10····/˘····
As a bird speeds forth from the opened tent,10·······/˘·
As the smoke flies out when it finds a vent,10··········
To lose itself in the spending,—8··˘/··/˘
Does it travel wide, does it travel far,10··/˘···/˘·
To find the place where all spirits are?9······/˘·
Does it measure long leagues from star to star,10··/˘······
And feel its travel unending?8···/˘˘/˘
And caught by each baffling, blowing wind,9····/˘/˘·
Storm-tossed and beaten, before, behind,9···/˘····
Till the courage fails and the sight is blind,10··/˘······
Must it go in search of its heaven?9·······/˘
I do not think that it can be so;9·········
For weary is life, as all men know,9·/˘······
And battling and struggling to and fro9·/˘·/˘···
Man goes from his morn to his even.9·······/˘
And surely this is enough to bear,—9·/˘··˘/··
The long day’s work in the sun’s hot glare,9·········
The doubt and the loss which breed despair,9·······˘/
The anguish of baffled hoping.8·/˘·/˘/˘
And when the end of it all has come,9·········
And the soul has won the right to its home,10··········
I do not believe it must wander and roam11···˘/··/˘··
Through the infinite spaces groping.9··/˘˘/˘/˘
No; wild may the storm be, and dark the day,10··········
And the shuddering soul may clasp its clay,9··/˘·····
Afraid to go and unwilling to stay;10˘/···˘/˘··
But when it girds it for going,8······/˘
With a rapture of sudden consciousness,9··/˘·/˘/˘
I think it awakes to a knowledge of this,11···˘/··/˘··
That heaven earth’s closest neighbor is,8·/·/˘/˘·
And only waits for our knowing;9·/˘··/˘/˘
That ’tis but a step from dark to day,9·········
From the worn-out tent and the burial clay,10·······/˘·
To the rapture of youth renewed for aye,10··/˘··˘/··
And the smile of the saints uprisen;9·········
And that just where the soul, perplexed and awed,10······˘/··
Begins its journey, it meets the Lord,9˘/·/˘····
And finds that heaven and the great reward9···/···˘/
Lay just outside of its prison!8··//··/˘

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