Derelict

Susan Coolidge (1835–1905) · 1889

iambic pentameter · AABCCB · 90 lines · from A Few More Verses

ABANDONED wrecks they plunge and drift,The sport of sea and wind,The tempest drives, the billows lift,The aimless sails they flap and shiftWith impulse vague and blind,As tossing on from wave to waveThey seek—and shun—the yawning grave.

The decks once trodden by busy feetMan nevermore shall tread;The cargoes brave of wine or wheat,Now soaked with salt and drenched with sleet,And mixed and scatterèd,No merchant shall appraise or buyOr store in vat or granary.

The wet ropes pull the creaking sails,As though by hands drawn tight.Echoes the hold with ghostly wails,While daylight wanes, and twilight pales,And drops the heavy night,And vast and silent fish swim by,And scan the wreck with cruel eye.

Ha! lights ahead! A ship is near!The dumb wreck makes no sign;No lantern shows, returns no cheer,But straight and full, without a veer,Sped by the urging brineShe goes—a crash! her errand done,The deadly, lonely thing drives on.

Oh, hopeless lives, distorted, crushed,Which, like the lonely wreck,Lashed by the waves and tempest-tossed,With rudder gone and cargo lost,Torn ribs and leaking deck,Plunge on through sunshine and eclipse,A menace to the happier ships.

All oceans know them, and all lands.Speechless they drift us by;To questioning voices, friendly hands,Warnings or counsels or commands,Still making no reply.God send them help if help may be,Or sink them harmless in his sea.

WHAT was she most like? Was she like the wind,Fresh always, and untired; intent to findNew fields to penetrate, new heights to gain;Scattering all mists with sudden, radiant wing;Stirring the languid pulses; quickeningThe apathetic mood, the weary brain?

Or was she like the sun, whose gift of cheerEndureth for all seasons of the year,Alike in winter’s cold or summer’s heat?Or like the sea, which brings its gifts from far,And still, wherever want and straitness are,Lays down a sudden largess at their feet?

Or was she like a wood, where light and shade,And sound and silence, mingle unafraid;Where mosses cluster, and, in coverts dark,Shy blossoms court the brief and wandering air,Mysteriously sweet; and here and thereA firefly flashes like a sudden spark?

Or like a wilful brook, which laughs and leapsAll unexpectedly, and never keepsThe course predicted, as it seaward flows?Or like a stream-fed river, brimming high?Or like a fruit, where those who love descryA pungent charm no other flavor knows?

I cannot find her type. In her were blentEach varied and each fortunate elementWhich souls combine, with something all her own,Sadness and mirthfulness, a chorded strain,The tender heart, the keen and searching brain,The social zest, the power to live alone.

Comrade of comrades, giving man the slipTo seek in Nature truest comradeship;Tenacity and impulse ruled her fate,This grasping firmly what that flashed to feel,—The velvet scabbard and the sword of steel,The gift to strongly love, to frankly hate!

Patience as strong as was her hopefulness;A joy in living which grew never lessAs years went on and age drew gravely nigh;Vision which pierced the veiling mists of pain,And saw beyond the mortal shadows plainThe eternal day-dawn broadening in the sky.

The love of Doing, and the scorn of Done;The playful fancy, which, like glinting sun,No chill could daunt, no loneliness could smother.Upon her ardent pulse Death’s chillness lies;Closed the brave lips, the merry, questioning eyes.She was herself!—there is not such another.

Words in this poem 30
aimless a.
Without aim or purpose; as, an aimless life.
nevermore adv.
Never again; at no time hereafter. Testament of Love. Tyndale.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
sleet n.
The part of a mortar extending from the chamber to the trunnions.
ghostly a.
Relating to the soul; not carnal or secular; spiritual; as, a ghostly confessor. [OE. gastlich, gostlich, AS. gastlic. See Ghost.]
daylight n.
The light of day as opposed to the darkness of night; the light of the sun, as opposed to that of the moon or to artificial light.
scan v. t.
To mount by steps; to go through with step by step. [L. scandere, scansum, to climb, to scan, akin to Skr. skand to spring, leap: cf. F. scander. Cf. Ascend, Descend, Scale a ladder.]
ahead adv.
In or to the front; in advance; onward. [Pref. a- + head.]
sunshine n.
The light of the sun, or the place where it shines; the direct rays of the sun, the place where they fall, or the warmth and light which they give.
speechless a.
Destitute or deprived of the faculty of speech.
quickening n.
The act or process of making or of becoming quick.
wherever adv.
At or in whatever place; wheresoever.
straitness n.
The quality or condition of being strait; especially, a pinched condition or situation caused by poverty; as, the straitnessof their circumstances.
largess n.
Liberality; generosity; bounty. [F. largesse, fr. large. See Large, a.]
mysteriously adv.
In a mysterious manner.
firefly n.
Any luminous winged insect, esp. luminous beetles of the family Lampyridæ.
seaward a.
Directed or situated toward the sea. Donne.
brimming a.
Full to the brim; overflowing.
descry
, Discovery or view, as of an army seen at a distance.
blent p. p.
Blinded. Also (Chaucer), 3d sing. pres. Blindeth.
sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.
zest n.
A piece of orange or lemon peel, or the aromatic oil which may be squeezed from such peel, used to give flavor to liquor, etc. [F. zeste, probably fr. L. schistos split, cleft, divided, Gr. Schism.]
comradeship n.
The state of being a comrade; intimate fellowship.
frankly adv.
In a frank manner; freely.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
gravely adv.
In a grave manner.
veiling n.
A veil; a thin covering; also, material for making veils.
daunt v. t.
To overcome; to conquer. [OF. danter, F. dompter to tame, subdue, fr. L. domitare, v. intens. of domare to tame. See Tame.]
loneliness n.
The condition of being lonely; solitude; seclusion.
chillness n.
Coolness; coldness; a chill.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Derelict is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Few More Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #49518; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Derelict is 90 lines in 14 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is AABCCB, complete in 8 of its 14 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAABCC driftA · windB · liftA · shiftA · blindB · waveC · graveC
  2. 2 A-AA--- feetA · tread · wheatA · sleetA · scatterèd · buy · granary
  3. 3 ABAABCC sailsA · tightB · wailsA · palesA · nightB · byC · eyeC
  4. 4 ABAAB-- nearA · signB · cheerA · veerA · brineB · done · on
  5. 5 -ABBACC crushed · wreckA · tossedB · lostB · deckA · eclipseC · shipsC
  6. 6 ABAABCC landsA · byB · handsA · commandsA · replyB · beC · seaC
  7. 7 AABCCB windA · findA · gainB · wingC · quickeningC · brainB
  8. 8 AABCCB cheerA · yearA · heatB · farC · areC · feetB
  9. 9 AABCCB shadeA · unafraidA · darkB · airC · thereC · sparkB
  10. 10 AABCCB leapsA · keepsA · flowsB · highC · descryC · knowsB
  11. 11 AABCCB blentA · elementA · ownB · strainC · brainC · aloneB
  12. 12 AABCCB slipA · comradeshipA · fateB · feelC · steelC · hateB
  13. 13 AABCCB hopefulnessA · lessA · nighB · painC · plainC · skyB
  14. 14 AABCCB doneA · sunA · smotherB · liesC · eyesC · anotherB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
ABANDONED wrecks they plunge and drift,8˘/˘·····
The sport of sea and wind,6······
The tempest drives, the billows lift,8·/˘··/˘·
The aimless sails they flap and shift8·/˘·····
With impulse vague and blind,6·/˘···
As tossing on from wave to wave8·/˘·····
They seek—and shun—the yawning grave.8·····/˘·
The decks once trodden by busy feet9···/˘·/˘·
Man nevermore shall tread;6·/˘···
The cargoes brave of wine or wheat,8·/······
Now soaked with salt and drenched with sleet,8········
And mixed and scatterèd,5·····
No merchant shall appraise or buy8·/˘·˘/··
Or store in vat or granary.8·····/˘˘
The wet ropes pull the creaking sails,8·····/˘·
As though by hands drawn tight.6······
Echoes the hold with ghostly wails,8/˘···/˘·
While daylight wanes, and twilight pales,8·/···/··
And drops the heavy night,6···/˘·
And vast and silent fish swim by,8···/˘···
And scan the wreck with cruel eye.8·····/˘·
Ha! lights ahead! A ship is near!8··˘/····
The dumb wreck makes no sign;6······
No lantern shows, returns no cheer,8·/˘·˘/··
But straight and full, without a veer,8········
Sped by the urging brine6···/˘·
She goes—a crash! her errand done,8·····/˘·
The deadly, lonely thing drives on.8·/˘/˘···
Oh, hopeless lives, distorted, crushed,8·/˘·˘/˘·
Which, like the lonely wreck,6···/˘·
Lashed by the waves and tempest-tossed,8·····/˘·
With rudder gone and cargo lost,8·/˘··/··
Torn ribs and leaking deck,6···/˘·
Plunge on through sunshine and eclipse,8···/··˘/
A menace to the happier ships.8·/˘··/˘·
All oceans know them, and all lands.8·/˘·····
Speechless they drift us by;6/˘····
To questioning voices, friendly hands,8·/˘/˘/˘·
Warnings or counsels or commands,8/˘·/˘·˘/
Still making no reply.6·/˘·˘/
God send them help if help may be,8········
Or sink them harmless in his sea.8···/˘···
WHAT was she most like? Was she like the wind,10··········
Fresh always, and untired; intent to find10·/····˘/··
New fields to penetrate, new heights to gain;10···/˘·····
Scattering all mists with sudden, radiant wing;10/˘···/˘/˘·
Stirring the languid pulses; quickening9/˘·/˘/˘/˘
The apathetic mood, the weary brain?10··˘/˘··/˘·
Or was she like the sun, whose gift of cheer10··········
Endureth for all seasons of the year,10˘/˘··/˘···
Alike in winter’s cold or summer’s heat?10˘/·/˘··/˘·
Or like the sea, which brings its gifts from far,10··········
And still, wherever want and straitness are,10··˘/˘··/˘·
Lays down a sudden largess at their feet?10···/˘/˘···
Or was she like a wood, where light and shade,10··········
And sound and silence, mingle unafraid;10···/˘/˘·˘/
Where mosses cluster, and, in coverts dark,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Shy blossoms court the brief and wandering air,10·/˘····/˘·
Mysteriously sweet; and here and there8·/˘·····
A firefly flashes like a sudden spark?11·/˘·/˘··/˘·
Or like a wilful brook, which laughs and leaps10··········
All unexpectedly, and never keeps8··˘/˘·/·
The course predicted, as it seaward flows?10··˘/˘··/˘·
Or like a stream-fed river, brimming high?10·····/˘/˘·
Or like a fruit, where those who love descry10········˘/
A pungent charm no other flavor knows?10·/˘··/˘/˘·
I cannot find her type. In her were blent10·/˘·······
Each varied and each fortunate element9·/˘··/˘/˘
Which souls combine, with something all her own,10··˘/·/˘···
Sadness and mirthfulness, a chorded strain,10/˘·····/˘·
The tender heart, the keen and searching brain,10·/˘····/˘·
The social zest, the power to live alone.10·/˘··/··˘/
Comrade of comrades, giving man the slip10/··/·/˘···
To seek in Nature truest comradeship;10···/˘/˘/˘˘
Tenacity and impulse ruled her fate,9˘/˘·˘/···
This grasping firmly what that flashed to feel,—10·/˘/˘·····
The velvet scabbard and the sword of steel,10·/˘/˘·····
The gift to strongly love, to frankly hate!10···/˘··/˘·
Patience as strong as was her hopefulness;9/˘·····/˘
A joy in living which grew never less9···/˘··/·
As years went on and age drew gravely nigh;10·······/˘·
Vision which pierced the veiling mists of pain,10/˘···/˘···
And saw beyond the mortal shadows plain10·····/˘/··
The eternal day-dawn broadening in the sky.11·˘/˘··/˘···
The love of Doing, and the scorn of Done;9···/·····
The playful fancy, which, like glinting sun,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
No chill could daunt, no loneliness could smother.10·····/˘·/˘
Upon her ardent pulse Death’s chillness lies;10···/˘··/˘·
Closed the brave lips, the merry, questioning eyes.10·····/˘/˘·
She was herself!—there is not such another.11··˘/····˘/˘

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