Ode to Evening
If aught of oaten stop, or pastoral song,May hope, chaste Eve, to soothe thy modest ear,Like thy own brawling springs,Thy springs, and dying gales;
O Nymph reserved, while now the bright-hair'd sunSits in yon western tent, whose cloudy skirts,With brede ethereal wove,O'erhang his wavy bed:
Now air is hush'd, save where the weak-eyed batWith short shrill shriek flits by on leathern wing;Or where the beetle windsHis small but sullen horn,
As oft he rises 'midst the twilight path,Against the pilgrim borne in heedless hum:Now teach me, maid composed,To breathe some soften'd strain,
Whose numbers, stealing through thy darkening vale,May not unseemly with its stillness suit;As, musing slow, I hailThy genial loved return!
For when thy folding-star arising showsHis paly circlet, at his warning lampThe fragrant Hours, and ElvesWho slept in buds the day,
And many a Nymph who wreathes her brows with sedge,And sheds the freshening dew, and, lovelier still,The pensive Pleasures sweet,Prepare thy shadowy car.
Then let me rove some wild and heathy scene;Or find some ruin, 'midst its dreary dells,Whose walls more awful nodBy thy religious gleams.
Or, if chill blustering winds, or driving rain,Prevent my willing feet, be mine the hut,That, from the mountain's side,Views wilds, and swelling floods,
And hamlets brown, and dim-discover'd spires;And hears their simple bell, and marks o'er allThy dewy fingers drawThe gradual dusky veil.
While Spring shall pour his showers, as oft he wont,And bathe thy breathing tresses, meekest Eve!While Summer loves to sportBeneath thy lingering light;
While sallow Autumn fills thy lap with leaves;Or Winter, yelling through the troublous air,Affrights thy shrinking train,And rudely rends thy robes;
So long, regardful of thy quiet rule,Shall Fancy, Friendship, Science, smiling Peace,Thy gentlest influence own,And love thy favourite name!
Words in this poem 17
- aught n.
- Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
- oaten a.
- Consisting of an oat straw or stem; as, an oaten pipe.
- soothe v. t.
- To assent to as true. Testament of Love. [Originally, to assent to as true; OE. so to verify, AS. ges to prove the truth of, to bear witness. See Sooth, a.]
- brawling a.
- Quarreling; quarrelsome; noisy.
- wove
- p. pr. & rare vb. n. of Weave.
- leathern a.
- Made of leather; consisting of. leather; as, a leathern purse.
- sullen a.
- Lonely; solitary; desolate. Wyclif (Job iii. 14). [OE. solein, solain, lonely, sullen; through Old French fr. (assumed) LL. solanus solitary, fr. L. solus alone. See Sole, a.]
- vale n.
- A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
- stillness n.
- The quality or state of being still; quietness; silence; calmness; inactivity.
- genial a.
- Contributing to, or concerned in, propagation or production; generative; procreative; productive. [L. genialis: cf. OF. genial. See Genius.]
- paly a.
- Pale; wanting color; dim. Shak. Whittier. [From Pale, a.]
- circlet n.
- A little circle; esp., an ornament for the person, having the form of a circle; that which encircles, as a ring, a bracelet, or a headband.
- heathy a.
- Full of heath; abounding with heath; as, heathy land; heathy hills.
- dreary a.
- Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- troublous a.
- Full of trouble; causing trouble.
- regardful a.
- Heedful; attentive; observant.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
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Form and metre
Ode to Evening is 52 lines in 13 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 21% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 5 A-A- valeA · suit · hailA · return
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| If aught of oaten stop, or pastoral song, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| May hope, chaste Eve, to soothe thy modest ear, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Like thy own brawling springs, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Thy springs, and dying gales; | 6 | ···/˘· |
| O Nymph reserved, while now the bright-hair'd sun | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| Sits in yon western tent, whose cloudy skirts, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| With brede ethereal wove, | 7 | ··˘/˘˘· |
| O'erhang his wavy bed: | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Now air is hush'd, save where the weak-eyed bat | 10 | ·········· |
| With short shrill shriek flits by on leathern wing; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Or where the beetle winds | 6 | ···/˘· |
| His small but sullen horn, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| As oft he rises 'midst the twilight path, | 10 | ···/˘··/·· |
| Against the pilgrim borne in heedless hum: | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Now teach me, maid composed, | 6 | ····˘/ |
| To breathe some soften'd strain, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Whose numbers, stealing through thy darkening vale, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| May not unseemly with its stillness suit; | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘· |
| As, musing slow, I hail | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Thy genial loved return! | 6 | ·/˘·˘/ |
| For when thy folding-star arising shows | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘· |
| His paly circlet, at his warning lamp | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| The fragrant Hours, and Elves | 7 | ·/˘/˘·· |
| Who slept in buds the day, | 6 | ······ |
| And many a Nymph who wreathes her brows with sedge, | 10 | ·/········ |
| And sheds the freshening dew, and, lovelier still, | 11 | ···/˘······ |
| The pensive Pleasures sweet, | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| Prepare thy shadowy car. | 7 | ˘/·/˘˘· |
| Then let me rove some wild and heathy scene; | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Or find some ruin, 'midst its dreary dells, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Whose walls more awful nod | 6 | ···/˘· |
| By thy religious gleams. | 6 | ··˘/˘· |
| Or, if chill blustering winds, or driving rain, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Prevent my willing feet, be mine the hut, | 10 | ˘/·/˘····· |
| That, from the mountain's side, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| Views wilds, and swelling floods, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And hamlets brown, and dim-discover'd spires; | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| And hears their simple bell, and marks o'er all | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Thy dewy fingers draw | 6 | ·/˘/˘· |
| The gradual dusky veil. | 7 | ·/˘˘/˘· |
| While Spring shall pour his showers, as oft he wont, | 10 | ·····/···· |
| And bathe thy breathing tresses, meekest Eve! | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| While Summer loves to sport | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| Beneath thy lingering light; | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| While sallow Autumn fills thy lap with leaves; | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Or Winter, yelling through the troublous air, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Affrights thy shrinking train, | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And rudely rends thy robes; | 6 | ·/˘··· |
| So long, regardful of thy quiet rule, | 10 | ··˘/˘··/˘· |
| Shall Fancy, Friendship, Science, smiling Peace, | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘/˘· |
| Thy gentlest influence own, | 8 | ·/˘˘/˘˘· |
| And love thy favourite name! | 7 | ······· |
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