Mr. Moon: A Song of the Little People

Bliss Carman (1861–1929) · 1896

iambic trimeter · 105 lines · from More Songs from Vagabondia

O Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?Down on the hilltop,Down in the glen,Out in the clearin',To play with little men?Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,Hurry up your stumps!Don't you hear BullfrogCallin' to his wife,And old black CricketA-wheezin' at his fife?Hurry up your stumps,And get on your pumps!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,Hurry up along!The reeds in the currentAre whisperin' slow;The river's a-wimplin'To and fro.Or you'll miss the song!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,We're all here!Honey-bug, Thistledrift,White-imp, Weird,Wryface, Billiken,Quidnunc, Queered;We're all here,And the coast is clear!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,We're the little men!Dewlap, Pussymouse,Ferntip, Freak,Drink-again, Shambler,Talkytalk, Squeak;Three times tenOf us little men!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,We're all ready!Tallenough, Squaretoes,Amble, Tip,Buddybud, Heigho,Little black Pip;We're all ready,And the wind walks steady!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,We're thirty score;Yellowbeard, Piper,Lieabed, Toots,Meadowbee, Moonboy,Bully-in-boots;Three times moreThan thirty score.Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,Keep your eye peeled;Watch out to windward,Or you'll miss the fun,Down by the acreWhere the wheat-waves run;Keep your eye peeledFor the open field.Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,There's not much time!Hurry, if you're comin',You lazy old bones!You can sleep to-morrowWhile the Buzbuz drones;There's not much timeTill the church bells chime.Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Mr. Moon,Just see the clover!Soon we'll be goingWhere the Gray Goose wentWhen all her moneyWas spent, spent, spent!Down through the clover,When the revel's over!Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

O Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?Down where the Good FolkDance in a ring,Down where the Little FolkSing?Moon, Mr. Moon,When you comin' down?

Words in this poem

hilltop n.
The top of a hill.
bullfrog n.
A very large species of frog (Rana Catesbiana), found in North America; -- so named from its loud bellowing in spring.
quidnunc n.
One who is curious to know everything that passes; one who knows, or pretends to know, all that is going on. [L., what now]
dewlap n.
The pendulous skin under the neck of an ox, which laps or licks the dew in grazing. [Dew + lap to lick.]
squeak v. i.
To utter a sharp, shrill cry, usually of short duration; to cry with an acute tone, as an animal; or, to make a sharp, disagreeable noise, as a pipe or quill, a wagon wheel, a door; to creak. [Probably of imitative origin; cf. Sw. sqväka to croak, Icel. skvakka to give a sound as of water shaken in a bottle.]
amble v. i.
To go at the easy gait called an amble; -- applied to the horse or to its rider. [F. ambler to amble, fr. L. ambulare to walk, in LL., to amble, perh. fr. amb-, ambi-, and a root meaning to go: cf. Gr. base. Cf. Ambulate.]
acre n.
Any field of arable or pasture land. [OE. aker, AS. æcer; akin to OS. accar, OHG. achar, Ger. acker, Icel. akr, Sw. åker, Dan. ager, Goth. akrs, L. ager, Gr. ajra. *2, 206.]
chime n.
The harmonious sound of bells, or of musical instruments. [OE. chimbe, prop., cymbal, OF. cymbe, cymble, in a dialectic form, chymble, F. cymbale, L. cymbalum, fr. Gr. Cymbal.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Mr. Moon: A Song of the Little People is in the public domain. This text is taken from More Songs From Vagabondia, Project Gutenberg ebook #18007; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Mr. Moon: A Song of the Little People is 105 lines in 11 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AB-C-CAB moonA · downB · hilltop · glenC · clearin · menC · moonA · downB
  2. 2 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · stumpsB · bullfrog · wifeC · cricket · fifeC · stumpsB · pumpsB · moonA · down
  3. 3 AB-C-CBA- moonA · alongB · current · slowC · wimplin · froC · songB · moonA · down
  4. 4 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · hereB · thistledrift · weirdC · billiken · queeredC · hereB · clearB · moonA · down
  5. 5 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · menB · pussymouse · freakC · shambler · squeakC · tenB · menB · moonA · down
  6. 6 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · readyB · squaretoes · tipC · heigho · pipC · readyB · steadyB · moonA · down
  7. 7 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · scoreB · piper · tootsC · moonboy · bootsC · moreB · scoreB · moonA · down
  8. 8 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · peeledB · windward · funC · acre · runC · peeledB · fieldB · moonA · down
  9. 9 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · timeB · comin · bonesC · morrow · dronesC · timeB · chimeB · moonA · down
  10. 10 AB-C-CBBA- moonA · cloverB · going · wentC · money · spentC · cloverB · overB · moonA · down
  11. 11 ABCDCDAB moonA · downB · folkC · ringD · folkC · singD · moonA · downB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
O Moon, Mr. Moon,5··/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
Down on the hilltop,5···/·
Down in the glen,4····
Out in the clearin',5·····
To play with little men?6···/˘·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
Hurry up your stumps!5/˘···
Don't you hear Bullfrog5···/·
Callin' to his wife,5·····
And old black Cricket5···/˘
A-wheezin' at his fife?6······
Hurry up your stumps,5/˘···
And get on your pumps!5·····
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
Hurry up along!5/˘·˘/
The reeds in the current6····/˘
Are whisperin' slow;5·····
The river's a-wimplin'6·/˘···
To and fro.3···
Or you'll miss the song!5·····
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
We're all here!3···
Honey-bug, Thistledrift,6/˘····
White-imp, Weird,3···
Wryface, Billiken,5·····
Quidnunc, Queered;4/˘·˘
We're all here,3···
And the coast is clear!5·····
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
We're the little men!5··/˘·
Dewlap, Pussymouse,5/˘···
Ferntip, Freak,3···
Drink-again, Shambler,5·˘/··
Talkytalk, Squeak;4····
Three times ten3···
Of us little men!5··/˘·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
We're all ready!4··/˘
Tallenough, Squaretoes,5···/˘
Amble, Tip,3/˘·
Buddybud, Heigho,5·····
Little black Pip;4/˘··
We're all ready,4··/˘
And the wind walks steady!6····/˘
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
We're thirty score;4·/˘·
Yellowbeard, Piper,5···/˘
Lieabed, Toots,2··
Meadowbee, Moonboy,5·····
Bully-in-boots;4/˘··
Three times more3···
Than thirty score.4·/˘·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
Keep your eye peeled;5····˘
Watch out to windward,5···/˘
Or you'll miss the fun,5·····
Down by the acre5···/˘
Where the wheat-waves run;5·····
Keep your eye peeled5····˘
For the open field.5··/˘·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
There's not much time!4····
Hurry, if you're comin',6/˘··/˘
You lazy old bones!5·/˘··
You can sleep to-morrow6····/˘
While the Buzbuz drones;5·····
There's not much time4····
Till the church bells chime.5·····
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
Just see the clover!5···/˘
Soon we'll be going5···/˘
Where the Gray Goose went5·····
When all her money5···/˘
Was spent, spent, spent!4····
Down through the clover,5···/˘
When the revel's over!5··/˘·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
O Moon, Mr. Moon,5··/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·
Down where the Good Folk5·····
Dance in a ring,4····
Down where the Little Folk6···/˘·
Sing?1·
Moon, Mr. Moon,4·/˘·
When you comin' down?5··/˘·

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