"My Betsey Rose Politely, and Showed Her Out-Of-Doors"

Will Carleton (1845–1912) · 1873

AABB · 12 lines · from Farm Ballads

Since then I don't deny but there's been a word or two;But we've got our eyes wide open, and know just what to do:When one speaks cross the other just meets it with a laugh,And the first one's ready to give up considerable more than half.

Maybe you'll think me soft, Sir, a-talkin' in this style,But somehow it does me lots of good to tell it once in a while;And I do it for a compliment--'tis so that you can seeThat that there written agreement of yours was just the makin' of me.

So make out your bill, Mr. Lawyer: don't stop short of an X;Make it more if you want to, for I have got the checks.I'm richer than a National Bank, with all its treasures told,For I've got a wife at home now that's worth her weight in gold.

Words in this poem

maybe adv.
Perhaps; possibly; peradventure. [For it may be.]
somehow adv.
In one way or another; in some way not yet known or designated; by some means; as, the thing must be done somehow; he lives somehow.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

"My Betsey Rose Politely, and Showed Her Out-Of-Doors" is in the public domain. This text is taken from Farm Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #9500; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Will Carleton, "My Betsey Rose Politely, and Showed Her Out-Of-Doors", in Farm Ballads (1873), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9500, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/carleton-farm-ballads/my-betsey-rose-politely-and-showed-her-out-of-doors.html, id L23260.

Form and metre

"My Betsey Rose Politely, and Showed Her Out-Of-Doors" is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes AABB.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB twoA · doA · laughB · halfB
  2. 2 AABB styleA · whileA · seeB · meB
  3. 3 AABB xA · checksA · toldB · goldB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Since then I don't deny but there's been a word or two;13····˘/·······
But we've got our eyes wide open, and know just what to do:15···/˘··/˘······
When one speaks cross the other just meets it with a laugh,13·····/˘······
And the first one's ready to give up considerable more than half.17····/˘···˘/˘˘˘···
Maybe you'll think me soft, Sir, a-talkin' in this style,13/˘······/˘···
But somehow it does me lots of good to tell it once in a while;16·/··············
And I do it for a compliment--'tis so that you can see15······/˘˘······
That that there written agreement of yours was just the makin' of me.17···/˘˘/˘·····/˘··
So make out your bill, Mr. Lawyer: don't stop short of an X;15·····/˘/˘······
Make it more if you want to, for I have got the checks.13·············
I'm richer than a National Bank, with all its treasures told,15·/˘··/˘˘····/˘·
For I've got a wife at home now that's worth her weight in gold.14··············

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