Lines on Revisiting a Scottish River

Thomas Campbell (1777–1844) · 1824

iambic pentameter · spenserian stanza · 36 lines · from The Pleasures of Hope, and Other Poems

And call they this Improvement?—to have changed,My native Clyde, thy once romantic shore,Where Nature’s face is banished and estranged,And Heaven reflected in thy wave no more;Whose banks, that sweetened May-day’s breath before,Lie sere and leafless now in summer’s beam,With sooty exhalations covered o’er;And for the daisied green sward, down thy streamUnsightly brick-lanes smoke, and clanking engines gleam.

Speak not to me of swarms the scene sustains;One heart free tasting Nature’s breath and bloomIs worth a thousand slaves to Mammon’s gains.But whither goes that wealth, and gladd’ning whom?See, left but life enough and breathing-roomThe hunger and the hope of life to feel,Yon pale Mechanic bending o’er his loom,And Childhood’s self as at Ixion’s wheel,From morn till midnight tasked to earn its little meal.

Is this Improvement?—where the human breedDegenerates as they swarm and overflow,Till Toil grows cheaper than the trodden weed,And man competes with man, like foe with foe,Till Death, that thins them, scarce seems public woe?Improvement!—smiles it in the poor man’s eyes,Or blooms it on the cheek of Labour?—No—To gorge a few with Trade’s precarious prize,We banish rural life, and breathe unwholesome skies.

Nor call that evil slight; God has not givenThis passion to the heart of man in vain,For Earth’s green face, th’ untainted air of Heaven,And all the bliss of Nature’s rustic reign.For not alone our frame imbibes a stainFrom fœtid skies; the spirit’s healthy prideFades in their gloom—And therefore I complain,That thou no more through pastoral scenes shouldst glide,My Wallace’s own stream, and once romantic Clyde!

Words in this poem

sere n.
Claw; talon. Chapman. [F. serre.]
daisied a.
Full of daisies; adorned with daisies.
whither adv.
To what place; -- used interrogatively; as, whither goest thou [OE. whider. AS. hwider; akin to E. where, who; cf. Goth. hvadre whither. See Who, and cf. Hither, Thither.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
childhood n.
The state of being a child; the time in which persons are children; the condition or time from infancy to puberty. [AS. cildhad; cild child + -had. See Child, and hood.]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
precarious a.
Depending on the will or pleasure of another; held by courtesy; liable to be changed or lost at the pleasure of another; as, precarious privileges. [L. precarius obtained by begging or prayer, depending on request or on the will of another, fr. precari to pray, beg. See Pray.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Lines on Revisiting a Scottish River is 36 lines in 4 stanzas of 9 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCBCC, complete in 2 of its 4 stanzas; the stanza is the Spenserian stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBC-CC changedA · shoreB · estrangedA · moreB · beforeB · beamC · o'er · streamC · gleamC
  2. 2 ABABBCBCC sustainsA · bloomB · gainsA · whomB · roomB · feelC · loomB · wheelC · mealC
  3. 3 ABABBCBCC breedA · overflowB · weedA · foeB · woeB · eyesC · noB · prizeC · skiesC
  4. 4 AAAAABABB givenA · vainA · heavenA · reignA · stainA · prideB · complainA · glideB · clydeB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
And call they this Improvement?—to have changed,10····˘/˘···
My native Clyde, thy once romantic shore,10·/˘···˘/˘·
Where Nature’s face is banished and estranged,10·/˘··/˘·˘/
And Heaven reflected in thy wave no more;10·/˘/˘·····
Whose banks, that sweetened May-day’s breath before,10···/˘·····
Lie sere and leafless now in summer’s beam,10···/˘··/˘·
With sooty exhalations covered o’er;10·/˘·˘/˘/˘·
And for the daisied green sward, down thy stream10···/˘·····
Unsightly brick-lanes smoke, and clanking engines gleam.12˘/˘····/˘/˘·
Speak not to me of swarms the scene sustains;10········˘/
One heart free tasting Nature’s breath and bloom10···/˘/˘···
Is worth a thousand slaves to Mammon’s gains.10···/˘·····
But whither goes that wealth, and gladd’ning whom?10·/˘·······
See, left but life enough and breathing-room10····˘/·/˘·
The hunger and the hope of life to feel,10·/˘·······
Yon pale Mechanic bending o’er his loom,10··˘/˘/˘···
And Childhood’s self as at Ixion’s wheel,10·/····˘/˘·
From morn till midnight tasked to earn its little meal.12···/·····/˘·
Is this Improvement?—where the human breed10··˘/˘··/˘·
Degenerates as they swarm and overflow,10˘/˘····/˘·
Till Toil grows cheaper than the trodden weed,10···/˘··/˘·
And man competes with man, like foe with foe,10··˘/······
Till Death, that thins them, scarce seems public woe?10·······/˘·
Improvement!—smiles it in the poor man’s eyes,10˘/˘·······
Or blooms it on the cheek of Labour?—No—10·······/··
To gorge a few with Trade’s precarious prize,10······˘/˘·
We banish rural life, and breathe unwholesome skies.13·/˘/˘········
Nor call that evil slight; God has not given11···/˘····/˘
This passion to the heart of man in vain,10·/˘·······
For Earth’s green face, th’ untainted air of Heaven,11····˘/˘··/˘
And all the bliss of Nature’s rustic reign.10·····/˘/˘·
For not alone our frame imbibes a stain10··˘//·˘/··
From fœtid skies; the spirit’s healthy pride10·····/˘/˘·
Fades in their gloom—And therefore I complain,10········˘/
That thou no more through pastoral scenes shouldst glide,10·····/˘···
My Wallace’s own stream, and once romantic Clyde!11·/˘····˘/˘·

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