The Isle of Achilles (From the Greek)

Robert Bridges (1844–1930) · 1873–1912

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 107 lines · from Poetical Works

Τὁν φἱλτατὁν σοι παἱδ' ἑμοἱ τ', Ἁχιλλἑαὑψει δὑμους ναἱοντα νησιωτικοὑςΔευκἡν κατ' ἁκτἡν ἑντὁς Εὑξεἱνου πὁρου.

Voyaging northwards by the western strandOf the Euxine sea we came to where the landSinks low in salt morass and wooded plain:Here mighty Ister pushes to the main,Forking his turbid flood in channels threeTo plough the sands wherewith he chokes the sea.

Against his middle arm, not many a mileIn the offing of black water is the isleNamed of Achilles, or as Leukê known,Which tender Thetis, counselling aloneWith her wise sire beneath the ocean-waveUnto her child's departed spirit gave,Where he might still his love and fame enjoy,Through the vain Danaan cause fordone at Troy.Thither Achilles passed, and long fulfill'dHis earthly lot, as the high gods had will'd,Far from the rivalries of men, from strife,From arms, from woman's love and toil of life.Now of his lone abode I will unfoldWhat there I saw, or was by others told.

There is in truth a temple on the isle;Therein a wooden statue of rude styleAnd workmanship antique with helm of lead:Else all is desert, uninhabited;Only a few goats browse the wind-swept rocks,And oft the stragglers of their starving flocksAre caught and sacrificed by whomsoe'er,Whoever of chance or purpose hither fare:About the fence lie strewn their bleaching bones.

But in the temple jewels and precious stones,Upheapt with golden rings and vials lie,Thankofferings to Achilles, and thereby,Written or scratch'd upon the walls in view,Inscriptions, with the givers' names thereto,Some in Romaic character, some Greek,As each man in the tongue that he might speakWrote verse of praise, or prayer for good to come,To Achilles most, but to Patroclus some;For those who strongly would Achilles moveApproach him by the pathway of his love.

Thousands of birds frequent the sheltering shrine,The dippers and the swimmers of the brine,Sea-mew and gull and diving cormorant,Fishers that on the high cliff make their hauntSheer inaccessible, and sun themselvesHuddled arow upon the narrow shelves:--And surely no like wonder e'er hath beenAs that such birds should keep the temple clean;But thus they do: at earliest dawn of dayThey flock to sea and in the waters play,And when they well have wet their plumage light,Back to the sanctuary they take flightSplashing the walls and columns with fresh brine,Till all the stone doth fairly drip and shine,When off again they skim asea for moreAnd soon returning sprinkle steps and floor,And sweep all cleanly with their wide-spread wings.

From other men I have learnt further things.If any of free purpose, thus they tell,Sail'd hither to consult the oracle,--For oracle there was,--they sacrificedSuch victims as they brought, if such sufficed,And some they slew, some to the god set free:But they who driven from their course at seaChanced on the isle, took of the goats thereonAnd pray'd Achilles to accept his own.Then made they a gift, and when they had offer'd once,If to their question there was no response,They added to the gift and asked again;Yea twice and more, until the god should deignAnswer to give, their offering they renew'd;Whereby great riches to the shrine ensued.And when both sacrifice and gifts were madeThey worship'd at the shrine, and as they pray'dSailors aver that often hath been seenA man like to a god, of warrior mien,A beauteous form of figure swift and strong;Down on his shoulders his light hair hung longAnd his full armour was enchast with gold:While some, who with their eyes might nought behold,Say that with music strange the air was stir'd;And some there are, who have both seen and heard:And if a man wish to be favour'd more,He need but spend one night upon the shore;To him in sleep Achilles will appearAnd lead him to his tent, and with good cheerShow him all friendliness that men desire;Patroclus pours the wine, and he his lyreTakes from the pole and plays the strains thereonWhich Cheiron taught him first on Pelion.

These things I tell as they were told to me,Nor do I question but it well may be:For sure I am that, if man ever was,Achilles was a hero, both becauseOf his high birth and beauty, his country's call,His valour of soul, his early death withal,For Homer's praise, the crown of human art;And that above all praise he had at heartA gentler passion in her sovran sway,And when his love died threw his life away.

Bright, my belovèd, be thy day,This eve of Summer's fall:And Autumn mass his flowers gayTo crown thy festival!

Words in this poem 27
northwards adv.
Toward the north, or toward a point nearer to the north than to the east or west point.
morass n.
A tract of soft, wet ground; a marsh; a fen. Morass ore. (Min.) See Bog ore, under Bog. [OE. marras, mareis (perh. through D. moeras), fr. F. marais, prob. from L. mare sea, in LL., any body of water; but perh. influenced by some German word. See Me]
wherewith adv.
With which; -- used relatively.
isle v. t.
To cause to become an island, or like an island; to surround or encompass; to island.
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
fordone a.
Undone; ruined. [See Fordo.]
strife n.
The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
abode n.
Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]
whoever pron.
Whatever person; any person who; be or she who; any one who; as, he shall be punished, whoever he may be.
romaic a.
Of or relating to modern Greece, and especially to its language. [NGr. romaïque. See Roman.]
wrote v. i.
To root with the snout. See 1st Root. [OE. wroten. See 1st Root.]
pathway n.
A footpath; a beaten track; any path or course. Also used figuratively.
arow adv.
In a row, line, or rank; successively; in order. [Pref. a- + row.]
fairly adv.
In a fairmanner; clearly; openly; plainly; fully; distinctly; frankly.
drip v. i.
To fall in drops; as, water drips from the eaves. [Akin to LG. drippen, Dan. dryppe, from a noun. See Drop.]
cleanly a.
Habitually clean; pure; innocent. [From Clean.]
consult n.
The act of consulting or deliberating; consultation; also, the result of consulation; determination; decision.
oracle v. i.
To utter oracles.
thereon adv.
On that or this. [AS. . See There, and On.]
deign v. t.
To esteem worthy; to consider worth notice; -- opposed to disdain. [OE. deinen, deignen, OF. degner, deigner, daigner, F. daigner, fr. L. dignari to deem worthy, deign, fr. dignus worthy; akin to decere to be fitting. See Decent]
aver n.
A work horse, or working ox. [OF. aver domestic animal, whence LL. averia, pl. cattle. See Habit, and cf. Average.]
beauteous a.
Full of beauty; beautiful; very handsome. [Mostly poetic] -- Beau"te*ous*ly, adv. --
armour n.
Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
friendliness n.
The condition or quality of being friendly. Sir P. Sidney.
withal adv.
With this; with that. [With + all.]
sovran a.
A variant of Sovereign.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Isle of Achilles (From the Greek) is 107 lines in 9 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 77% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.7 syllables. 5 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 34% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AAA — · — · —
  2. 2 AABBCC strandA · landA · plainB · mainB · threeC · seaC
  3. 3 AABBCCDDEEFFGG mileA · isleA · knownB · aloneB · waveC · gaveC · enjoyD · troyD · fulfill'dE · will'dE · strifeF · lifeF · unfoldG · toldG
  4. 4 AABBCC--- isleA · styleA · leadB · uninhabitedB · rocksC · flocksC · whomsoe'er · fare · bones
  5. 5 -AA--BBCCDD stones · lieA · therebyA · view · thereto · greekB · speakB · comeC · someC · moveD · loveD
  6. 6 AABBCC--DDEEAAFF- shrineA · brineA · cormorantB · hauntB · themselvesC · shelvesC · been · clean · dayD · playD · lightE · flightE · brineA · shineA · moreF · floorF · wings
  7. 7 -AABBCC------DDEEFFGGHHIIJJKK---- things · tellA · oracleA · sacrificedB · sufficedB · freeC · seaC · thereon · own · once · response · again · deign · renew'dD · ensuedD · madeE · pray'dE · seenF · mienF · strongG · longG · goldH · beholdH · stir'dI · heardI · moreJ · shoreJ · appearK · cheerK · desire · lyre · thereon · pelion
  8. 8 AABBCCDDEE meA · beA · wasB · becauseB · callC · withalC · artD · heartD · swayE · awayE
  9. 9 ABAB dayA · fallB · gayA · festivalB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Τὁν φἱλτατὁν σοι παἱδ' ἑμοἱ τ', Ἁχιλλἑα2··
ὑψει δὑμους ναἱοντα νησιωτικοὑς0
Δευκἡν κατ' ἁκτἡν ἑντὁς Εὑξεἱνου πὁρου.1·
Voyaging northwards by the western strand10/˘˘/˘··/˘·
Of the Euxine sea we came to where the land11···········
Sinks low in salt morass and wooded plain:10····˘/·/˘·
Here mighty Ister pushes to the main,10·/˘··/˘···
Forking his turbid flood in channels three10/˘·/˘··/˘·
To plough the sands wherewith he chokes the sea.10····˘/····
Against his middle arm, not many a mile10···/˘··/··
In the offing of black water is the isle11··/˘··/˘···
Named of Achilles, or as Leukê known,10·˘·˘/˘····
Which tender Thetis, counselling alone10·/˘/˘/˘˘˘/
With her wise sire beneath the ocean-wave10···/···/˘·
Unto her child's departed spirit gave,10····˘/˘/˘·
Where he might still his love and fame enjoy,10········˘/
Through the vain Danaan cause fordone at Troy.10······˘/··
Thither Achilles passed, and long fulfill'd10/˘˘/˘···˘/
His earthly lot, as the high gods had will'd,10·/˘·······
Far from the rivalries of men, from strife,10···/˘˘····
From arms, from woman's love and toil of life.10···/˘·····
Now of his lone abode I will unfold10····˘/··˘/
What there I saw, or was by others told.10·······/˘·
There is in truth a temple on the isle;10·····/˘···
Therein a wooden statue of rude style10···/˘/····
And workmanship antique with helm of lead:10·/˘·˘/····
Else all is desert, uninhabited;10···/˘·˘/˘˘
Only a few goats browse the wind-swept rocks,10/˘········
And oft the stragglers of their starving flocks10···/˘··/˘·
Are caught and sacrificed by whomsoe'er,10···/˘·˘···
Whoever of chance or purpose hither fare:11˘/˘···/˘/˘·
About the fence lie strewn their bleaching bones.10·······/˘·
But in the temple jewels and precious stones,11···/˘/˘·/˘·
Upheapt with golden rings and vials lie,10···/˘··/˘·
Thankofferings to Achilles, and thereby,11·····˘/˘···
Written or scratch'd upon the walls in view,10/˘········
Inscriptions, with the givers' names thereto,10˘/˘··/˘·˘/
Some in Romaic character, some Greek,10··˘/˘/˘˘··
As each man in the tongue that he might speak10··········
Wrote verse of praise, or prayer for good to come,10··········
To Achilles most, but to Patroclus some;11·˘/˘·······
For those who strongly would Achilles move10···/˘·˘/˘·
Approach him by the pathway of his love.10˘/···/····
Thousands of birds frequent the sheltering shrine,10/˘··/˘·/˘·
The dippers and the swimmers of the brine,10·/˘··/˘···
Sea-mew and gull and diving cormorant,10·····/˘/˘˘
Fishers that on the high cliff make their haunt10/˘········
Sheer inaccessible, and sun themselves10··˘/˘˘··˘/
Huddled arow upon the narrow shelves:--10/˘˘/···/˘·
And surely no like wonder e'er hath been10·/˘··/˘···
As that such birds should keep the temple clean;10·······/˘·
But thus they do: at earliest dawn of day10·····/˘···
They flock to sea and in the waters play,10·······/˘·
And when they well have wet their plumage light,10·······/˘·
Back to the sanctuary they take flight10···/˘·˘···
Splashing the walls and columns with fresh brine,10/˘···/˘···
Till all the stone doth fairly drip and shine,10·····/˘···
When off again they skim asea for more11··˘/··˘/˘··
And soon returning sprinkle steps and floor,10··˘/˘/˘···
And sweep all cleanly with their wide-spread wings.10···/˘·····
From other men I have learnt further things.10·/˘····/˘·
If any of free purpose, thus they tell,10·/˘··/˘···
Sail'd hither to consult the oracle,--10·/˘·˘/·/˘˘
For oracle there was,--they sacrificed10·/˘˘···/˘·
Such victims as they brought, if such sufficed,10·/˘·····˘/
And some they slew, some to the god set free:10··········
But they who driven from their course at sea10···/˘·····
Chanced on the isle, took of the goats thereon10········˘/
And pray'd Achilles to accept his own.10··˘/˘·˘/··
Then made they a gift, and when they had offer'd once,12·········/˘·
If to their question there was no response,10···/˘···˘/
They added to the gift and asked again;10·/˘·····˘/
Yea twice and more, until the god should deign10··········
Answer to give, their offering they renew'd;10/˘···/˘·˘/
Whereby great riches to the shrine ensued.10···/˘···˘/
And when both sacrifice and gifts were made10···/˘·····
They worship'd at the shrine, and as they pray'd10·/˘·······
Sailors aver that often hath been seen10/˘/˘·/˘···
A man like to a god, of warrior mien,10·······/˘·
A beauteous form of figure swift and strong;11·/˘˘··/˘···
Down on his shoulders his light hair hung long10···/˘·····
And his full armour was enchast with gold:10···/˘·····
While some, who with their eyes might nought behold,10········˘/
Say that with music strange the air was stir'd;10···/˘·····
And some there are, who have both seen and heard:10··········
And if a man wish to be favour'd more,10··········
He need but spend one night upon the shore;10··········
To him in sleep Achilles will appear10····˘/˘·˘/
And lead him to his tent, and with good cheer10··········
Show him all friendliness that men desire;11···/˘˘··˘/˘
Patroclus pours the wine, and he his lyre10··········
Takes from the pole and plays the strains thereon10········˘/
Which Cheiron taught him first on Pelion.9·········
These things I tell as they were told to me,10··········
Nor do I question but it well may be:10···/˘·····
For sure I am that, if man ever was,10·······/˘·
Achilles was a hero, both because10˘/˘··/˘···
Of his high birth and beauty, his country's call,11·····/˘·/˘·
His valour of soul, his early death withal,11·/˘···/˘·˘/
For Homer's praise, the crown of human art;10·/˘····/˘·
And that above all praise he had at heart10··········
A gentler passion in her sovran sway,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
And when his love died threw his life away.10········˘/
Bright, my belovèd, be thy day,7·······
This eve of Summer's fall:6···/˘·
And Autumn mass his flowers gay8·/˘··/˘·
To crown thy festival!6···/˘˘

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