Written December 1783

William Lisle Bowles (1762–1850) · 1789–1837

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 35 lines · from The Poetical Works, Volume I

And slow disease preyed on thy wasted frame;When every friend, ev'n like thy bloom, was fled,And Want bowed low thy unsupported head;Sure sad Humanity a tear might give,And Virtue say, Live, beauteous sufferer, live!But should there one be found, (amidst the fewWho with compassion thy last pangs might view),One who beheld thy errors with a tear,To whom the ruins of thy heart were dear,Who fondly hoped, the ruthful season past,Thy faded virtues might revive at last;Should such be found--oh! when he saw thee lie,Closing on every earthly hope thine eye;When he beheld despair, with rueful trace,Mark the strange features of thy altered face;When he beheld, as painful death drew nigh,Thy pale, pale cheek, thy feebly lifted eye,Thy chill, shrunk hand, hung down as in despair,Or slowly raised, with many a muttered prayer;--When thus, in early youth, he saw thee bendPoor to the grave, and die without a friend;Some sadder feelings might unbidden start,And more than common pity touch his heart!The eventful scene is closed; with pausing dreadAnd sorrow I drew nigh the silent bed;Thy look was calm--thy heart was cold and still,As if the world had never used it ill;Methought the last faint smile, with traces weak,Still seemed to linger on thy faded cheek.Poor Mary! though most beauteous in thy face,Ere sorrow touched it, beamed each lovely grace;Yet, oh! thy living features never woreA look so sweet, so eloquent before,As this, which bids all human passions cease,And tells my pitying heart you died in peace!

Words in this poem

beauteous a.
Full of beauty; beautiful; very handsome. [Mostly poetic] -- Beau"te*ous*ly, adv. --
sufferer n.
One who suffers; one who endures or undergoes suffering; one who sustains inconvenience or loss; as, sufferers by poverty or sickness; men are sufferers by fire or by losses at sea.
amidst prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
fondly adv.
Foolishly. Verstegan (1673).
ruthful a.
Full of ruth; as: (a) Pitiful; tender.
rueful a.
Causing one to rue or lament; woeful; mournful; sorrowful.
unbidden a.
Not bidden; not commanded.
eventful a.
Full of, or rich in, events or incidents; as, an eventful journey; an eventful period of history; an eventful period of life.
beamed a.
Furnished with beams, as the head of a stag.
pitying a.
Expressing pity; as, a pitying eye, glance, or word.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Written December 1783 is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetical Works of William Lisle Bowles, Vol. 1 With Memoir, Critical Dissertation, and Explanatory Notes by George Gilfillan, Project Gutenberg ebook #18915; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Written December 1783 is 35 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 91% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.1 syllables. 11% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AA--BBCCDDEEFFEEGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOO frame · fledA · headA · give · live · fewB · viewB · tearC · dearC · pastD · lastD · lieE · eyeE · traceF · faceF · nighE · eyeE · despairG · prayerG · bendH · friendH · startI · heartI · dreadJ · bedJ · stillK · illK · weakL · cheekL · faceM · graceM · woreN · beforeN · ceaseO · peaceO
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
And slow disease preyed on thy wasted frame;10··˘/···/˘·
When every friend, ev'n like thy bloom, was fled,10·/˘·······
And Want bowed low thy unsupported head;10·····˘˘/˘·
Sure sad Humanity a tear might give,10··˘/˘˘····
And Virtue say, Live, beauteous sufferer, live!11·/˘··/˘˘/˘·
But should there one be found, (amidst the few10······˘/··
Who with compassion thy last pangs might view),10··˘/˘·····
One who beheld thy errors with a tear,10··˘/·/˘···
To whom the ruins of thy heart were dear,10···/˘·····
Who fondly hoped, the ruthful season past,10·/˘··/˘/˘·
Thy faded virtues might revive at last;10·/˘/˘·˘/··
Should such be found--oh! when he saw thee lie,10··········
Closing on every earthly hope thine eye;10/˘·/˘/˘···
When he beheld despair, with rueful trace,10··˘/˘/·/˘·
Mark the strange features of thy altered face;10···/˘··/˘·
When he beheld, as painful death drew nigh,10··˘/·/˘···
Thy pale, pale cheek, thy feebly lifted eye,10·····/˘/˘·
Thy chill, shrunk hand, hung down as in despair,10········˘/
Or slowly raised, with many a muttered prayer;--10·/˘··/·/˘·
When thus, in early youth, he saw thee bend10···/˘·····
Poor to the grave, and die without a friend;10··········
Some sadder feelings might unbidden start,10·/˘/˘·····
And more than common pity touch his heart!10···/˘/˘···
The eventful scene is closed; with pausing dread11·˘/˘····/˘·
And sorrow I drew nigh the silent bed;10·/˘····/˘·
Thy look was calm--thy heart was cold and still,10··········
As if the world had never used it ill;10·····/˘···
Methought the last faint smile, with traces weak,10˘/·····/˘·
Still seemed to linger on thy faded cheek.10···/˘··/˘·
Poor Mary! though most beauteous in thy face,11·/˘··/˘˘···
Ere sorrow touched it, beamed each lovely grace;10·/˘····/˘·
Yet, oh! thy living features never wore10···/˘/˘/˘·
A look so sweet, so eloquent before,10·····/˘˘··
As this, which bids all human passions cease,10·····/˘/˘·
And tells my pitying heart you died in peace!10···/˘·····

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