On the Death of the Rev. William Benwell, M.A.

William Lisle Bowles (1762–1850) · 1789–1837

iambic pentameter · English sonnet · 14 lines · from Sonnets, and Other Poems

Thou camest with kind looks, when on the brinkAlmost of death I strove, and with mild voiceDidst soothe me, bidding my poor heart rejoice,Though smitten sore: Oh, I did little thinkThat thou, my friend, wouldst the first victim fallTo the stern King of Terrors! Thou didst fly,By pity prompted, at the poor man's cry;And soon thyself were stretched beneath the pall,Livid infection's prey. The deep distressOf her, who best thy inmost bosom knew,To whom thy faith was vowed; thy soul was true,What powers of faltering language shall express?As friendship bids, I feebly breathe my own,And sorrowing say, Pure spirit, thou art gone!

Words in this poem

brink n.
The edge, margin, or border of a steep place, as of a precipice; a bank or edge, as of a river or pit; a verge; a border; as, the brink of a chasm. Also Fig. [Dan. brink edge, verge; akin to Sw. brink declivity, hill, Icel. brekka; cf. LG. brink a grassy hill, W. bryn hill, bryncyn hillock.]
didst
, the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
soothe v. t.
To assent to as true. Testament of Love. [Originally, to assent to as true; OE. so to verify, AS. ges to prove the truth of, to bear witness. See Sooth, a.]
inmost a.
Deepest within; farthest from the surface or external part; innermost. [OE. innemest, AS. innemest, a double superlative form fr. inne within, fr. in in. The modern form is due to confusion with most. See In, and cf. Aftermost, Fore]
faltering a.
Hesitating; trembling.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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On the Death of the Rev. William Benwell, M.A. is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetical Works of William Lisle Bowles, Vol. 1 With Memoir, Critical Dissertation, and Explanatory Notes by George Gilfillan, Project Gutenberg ebook #18915; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

On the Death of the Rev. William Benwell, M.A. is 14 lines in a single stanza. It rhymes ABABCDCDEFEFGG, the pattern of the English sonnet. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 36% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other English sonnets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCDEFEFGG brinkA · voiceB · rejoiceA · thinkB · fallC · flyD · cryC · pallD · distressE · knewF · trueE · expressF · ownG · goneG
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Thou camest with kind looks, when on the brink10··········
Almost of death I strove, and with mild voice10/·········
Didst soothe me, bidding my poor heart rejoice,10···/˘···˘/
Though smitten sore: Oh, I did little think10·/˘····/˘·
That thou, my friend, wouldst the first victim fall10·······/˘·
To the stern King of Terrors! Thou didst fly,10·····/˘···
By pity prompted, at the poor man's cry;10·/˘/˘·····
And soon thyself were stretched beneath the pall,10··˘/······
Livid infection's prey. The deep distress10/˘˘/˘···˘/
Of her, who best thy inmost bosom knew,10·····/˘/˘·
To whom thy faith was vowed; thy soul was true,10··········
What powers of faltering language shall express?10·/·/˘/˘·˘/
As friendship bids, I feebly breathe my own,10·/˘··/˘···
And sorrowing say, Pure spirit, thou art gone!10·/˘˘··/···

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