Thel I

William Blake (1757–1827) · 1783–1794

iambic heptameter · unrhymed · 43 lines · from Poems of William Blake

The daughters of Mne Seraphim led round their sunny flocks,All but the youngest: she in paleness sought the secret air.To fade away like morning beauty from her mortal day:Down by the river of Adona her soft voice is heard;And thus her gentle lamentation falls like morning dew.

O life of this our spring! why fades the lotus of the water?Why fade these children of the spring? born but to smile & fall.Ah! Thel is like a watry bow, and like a parting cloud,Like a reflection in a glass: like shadows in the waterLike dreams of infants, like a smile upon an infants face.Like the doves voice, like transient day, like music in the air:Ah! gentle may I lay me down and gentle rest my head.And gentle sleep the sleep of death, and gently hear the voiceOf him that walketh in the garden in the evening time.

The Lilly of the valley breathing in the humble grassAnswerd the lovely maid and said: I am a watry weed,And I am very small and love to dwell in lowly vales:So weak the gilded butterfly scarce perches on my headYet I am visited from heaven and he that smiles on allWalks in the valley, and each morn over me spreads his handSaying, rejoice thou humble grass, thou new-born lily flower.Thou gentle maid of silent valleys and of modest brooks:For thou shall be clothed in light, and fed with morning manna:Till summers heat melts thee beside the fountains and the springsTo flourish in eternal vales: they why should Thel complain.Why should the mistress of the vales of Har, utter a sigh.She ceasd & smild in tears, then sat down in her silver shrine.

Thel answerd, O thou little virgin of the peaceful valley.Giving to those that cannot crave, the voiceless, the o'er tiredThe breath doth nourish the innocent lamb, he smells the milky garmentsHe crops thy flowers while thou sittest smiling in his face,Wiping his mild and meekin mouth from all contagious taints.Thy wine doth purify the golden honey; thy perfume.Which thou dost scatter on every little blade of grass that springsRevives the milked cow, & tames the fire-breathing steed.But Thel is like a faint cloud kindled at the rising sun:I vanish from my pearly throne, and who shall find my place.

Queen of the vales the Lily answered, ask the tender cloud,And it shall tell thee why it glitters in the morning sky.And why it scatters its bright beauty thro the humid air.Descend O little cloud & hover before the eyes of Thel.

The Cloud descended and the Lily bowd her modest head:And went to mind her numerous charge among the verdant grass.

Words in this poem

seraphim n.
The Hebrew plural of Seraph. Cf. Cherubim.
sunny a.
Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
scarce a.
Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
crave v. t.
To ask with earnestness or importunity; to ask with submission or humility; to beg; to entreat; to beseech; to implore. [AS. crafian; akin to Icel. krefia, Sw. kr, Dan. kr.]
voiceless a.
Having no voice, utterance, or vote; silent; mute; dumb.
steed n.
A horse, especially a spirited horse for state of war; -- used chiefly in poetry or stately prose. [OE. stede, AS. steda a stud-horse, war horse, fr. stod a stud of breeding steeds; akin to G. stute a mare, Icel. stedda, sto, a stud. *163. See Stud of horses.]
hover n.
A cover; a shelter; a protection. Carew. C. Kingsley. [Etymol. doubtful.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Thel I is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems of William Blake, Project Gutenberg ebook #574; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Thel I is 43 lines in 6 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic heptameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 14.1 syllables. 7 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic heptameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 A--A----- waterA · fall · cloud · waterA · face · air · head · voice · time
  2. 4 --ABA----B valley · tired · garmentsA · faceB · taintsA · perfume · springs · steed · sun · placeB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic heptameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The daughters of Mne Seraphim led round their sunny flocks,14·/˘··/˘˘···/˘·
All but the youngest: she in paleness sought the secret air.14···/˘··/˘··/˘·
To fade away like morning beauty from her mortal day:14··˘/·/˘/˘··/˘·
Down by the river of Adona her soft voice is heard;14···/˘·········
And thus her gentle lamentation falls like morning dew.14···/˘······/˘·
O life of this our spring! why fades the lotus of the water?15····/····/˘··/˘
Why fade these children of the spring? born but to smile & fall.13···/˘········
Ah! Thel is like a watry bow, and like a parting cloud,14·····/˘····/˘·
Like a reflection in a glass: like shadows in the water15··˘/˘····/···/˘
Like dreams of infants, like a smile upon an infants face.14···/˘······/˘·
Like the doves voice, like transient day, like music in the air:14·····/˘··/˘···
Ah! gentle may I lay me down and gentle rest my head.14·/˘······/˘···
And gentle sleep the sleep of death, and gently hear the voice14·/˘······/˘···
Of him that walketh in the garden in the evening time.14···/˘··/˘··/˘·
The Lilly of the valley breathing in the humble grass14·/˘··/˘/˘··/˘·
Answerd the lovely maid and said: I am a watry weed,14···/˘······/˘·
And I am very small and love to dwell in lowly vales:14···/˘······/˘·
So weak the gilded butterfly scarce perches on my head14···/˘/˘··/˘···
Yet I am visited from heaven and he that smiles on all14···/˘˘·/······
Walks in the valley, and each morn over me spreads his hand14···/˘·········
Saying, rejoice thou humble grass, thou new-born lily flower.15/˘˘/·/˘····/˘/˘
Thou gentle maid of silent valleys and of modest brooks:14·/˘··/˘/˘··/˘·
For thou shall be clothed in light, and fed with morning manna:14··········/˘/˘
Till summers heat melts thee beside the fountains and the springs14·/˘···˘/·/˘···
To flourish in eternal vales: they why should Thel complain.14·/˘·˘/˘·····˘/
Why should the mistress of the vales of Har, utter a sigh.14···/˘·····/˘··
She ceasd & smild in tears, then sat down in her silver shrine.13··········/˘·
Thel answerd, O thou little virgin of the peaceful valley.15·····/˘/˘··/˘/˘
Giving to those that cannot crave, the voiceless, the o'er tired15/˘···/˘··/˘··/˘
The breath doth nourish the innocent lamb, he smells the milky garments16···/˘·/˘····/˘/˘
He crops thy flowers while thou sittest smiling in his face,14···/˘··/˘/˘···
Wiping his mild and meekin mouth from all contagious taints.14/˘········˘/˘·
Thy wine doth purify the golden honey; thy perfume.14···/˘··/˘/˘·˘/
Which thou dost scatter on every little blade of grass that springs15···/˘·/˘/˘·····
Revives the milked cow, & tames the fire-breathing steed.13˘/··˘···/˘/˘·
But Thel is like a faint cloud kindled at the rising sun:14·······/˘··/˘·
I vanish from my pearly throne, and who shall find my place.14·/˘··/˘·······
Queen of the vales the Lily answered, ask the tender cloud,14·····/˘/˘··/˘·
And it shall tell thee why it glitters in the morning sky.14·······/˘··/˘·
And why it scatters its bright beauty thro the humid air.14···/˘··/˘··/˘·
Descend O little cloud & hover before the eyes of Thel.14˘/·/˘·/˘······
The Cloud descended and the Lily bowd her modest head:14··˘/˘··/˘··/˘·
And went to mind her numerous charge among the verdant grass.14·····/˘····/˘·

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