A Morning Fancy

Ambrose Bierce (1842–1914) · 1903

iambic pentameter · ABABBCDCDEE · 44 lines · from Shapes of Clay

I drifted (or I seemed to) in a boatUpon the surface of a shoreless seaWhereon no ship nor anything did float,Save only the frail bark supporting me;And that--it was so shadowy--seemed to beAlmost from out the very vapors wroughtOf the great ocean underneath its keel;And all that blue profound appeared as naughtBut thicker sky, translucent to reveal,Miles down, whatever through its spaces glided,Or at the bottom traveled or abided.

Great cities there I saw--of rich and poor,The palace and the hovel; mountains, vales,Forest and field, the desert and the moor,Tombs of the good and wise who'd lived in jails,And seas of denser fluid, white with sailsPushed at by currents moving here and thereAnd sensible to sight above the flatOf that opaquer deep. Ah, strange and fairThe nether world that I was gazing atWith beating heart from that exalted level,And--lest I founder--trembling like the devil!

The cities all were populous: men swarmedIn public places--chattered, laughed and wept;And savages their shining bodies warmedAt fires in primal woods. The wild beast leaptUpon its prey and slew it as it slept.Armies went forth to battle on the plainSo far, far down in that unfathomed deepThe living seemed as silent as the slain,Nor even the widows could be heard to weep.One might have thought their shaking was but laughter;And, truly, most were married shortly after.

Above the wreckage of that silent frayStrange fishes swam in circles, round and round--Black, double-finned; and once a little wayA bubble rose and burst without a soundAnd a man tumbled out upon the ground.Lord! 'twas an eerie thing to drift apaceOn that pellucid sea, beneath black skiesAnd o'er the heads of an undrowning race;And when I woke I said--to her surpriseWho came with chocolate, for me to drink it:"The atmosphere is deeper than you think it."

Words in this poem

shoreless a.
Having no shore or coast; of indefinite or unlimited extent; as, a shoreless ocean. Young.
whereon adv.
On which; -- used relatively; as, the earth whereon we live.
hovel n.
An open shed for sheltering cattle, or protecting produce, etc., from the weather. Brande & C. [OE. hovel, hovil, prob. a dim. fr. AS. hof house; akin to D. & G. hof court, yard, Icel. hof temple; cf. Prov. E. hove to take shelter, heuf shelter, home.]
nether a.
Situated down or below; lying beneath, or in the lower part; having a lower position; belonging to the region below; lower; under; -- opposed to upper. [OE. nethere, neithere, AS. ni, fr. the adv. ni downward; akin to neo below, beneath, D. neder down, G. nieder, Sw. nedre below, nether, a. & adv., and also to S]
populous a.
Abounding in people; full of inhabitants; containing many inhabitants in proportion to the extent of the country. [L. populosus, fr. populus people: cf. F. populeux.]
primal a.
First; primary; original; chief. [LL. primalis, fr. L. primus the first. See Prime, a.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
shortly adv.
In a short or brief time or manner; soon; quickly. [AS. sceortlice.]
wreckage n.
The act of wrecking, or state of being wrecked.
eerie a.
Serving to inspire fear, esp. a dread of seeing ghosts; wild; weird; as, eerie stories. [Scotch, fr. AS. earh timid.]
apace adv.
With a quick pace; quick; fast; speedily. [Pref. a- + pace. OE. a pas at a walk, in which a is the article. See Pace.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

A Morning Fancy is in the public domain. This text is taken from Shapes of Clay (1903), Project Gutenberg ebook #12658; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Ambrose Bierce, A Morning Fancy, in Shapes of Clay (1903), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #12658, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/bierce-shapes-of-clay/a-morning-fancy.html, id L27985.

Form and metre

A Morning Fancy is 44 lines in 4 stanzas of 11 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABABBCDCDEE. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBCDCDEE boatA · seaB · floatA · meB · beB · wroughtC · keelD · naughtC · revealD · glidedE · abidedE
  2. 2 ABABBCDCDEE poorA · valesB · moorA · jailsB · sailsB · thereC · flatD · fairC · atD · levelE · devilE
  3. 3 ABABBCDCDEE swarmedA · weptB · warmedA · leaptB · sleptB · plainC · deepD · slainC · weepD · laughterE · afterE
  4. 4 ABABBCDCDEE frayA · roundB · wayA · soundB · groundB · apaceC · skiesD · raceC · surpriseD · itE · itE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I drifted (or I seemed to) in a boat10·/˘·······
Upon the surface of a shoreless sea10···/˘··/˘·
Whereon no ship nor anything did float,10˘/···/˘···
Save only the frail bark supporting me;10·/˘···˘/˘·
And that--it was so shadowy--seemed to be10·····/˘···
Almost from out the very vapors wrought10/····/˘/˘·
Of the great ocean underneath its keel;10···/˘·˘/··
And all that blue profound appeared as naught10····˘/˘/··
But thicker sky, translucent to reveal,10·/˘·˘/˘·˘/
Miles down, whatever through its spaces glided,11···/˘··/˘/˘
Or at the bottom traveled or abided.11···/˘/˘·˘/˘
Great cities there I saw--of rich and poor,10·/˘·······
The palace and the hovel; mountains, vales,10·/˘··/˘/˘·
Forest and field, the desert and the moor,10/˘···˘/···
Tombs of the good and wise who'd lived in jails,10··········
And seas of denser fluid, white with sails10···/˘/˘···
Pushed at by currents moving here and there10···/˘/˘···
And sensible to sight above the flat10·/˘˘······
Of that opaquer deep. Ah, strange and fair10··········
The nether world that I was gazing at10·/˘····/˘·
With beating heart from that exalted level,11·/˘···˘/˘/˘
And--lest I founder--trembling like the devil!11···//˘˘··/˘
The cities all were populous: men swarmed10·/˘··/˘˘··
In public places--chattered, laughed and wept;10·/˘/˘/˘···
And savages their shining bodies warmed10·/˘˘·/˘/˘·
At fires in primal woods. The wild beast leapt10·/·/˘·····
Upon its prey and slew it as it slept.10··········
Armies went forth to battle on the plain10/˘···/˘···
So far, far down in that unfathomed deep10··········
The living seemed as silent as the slain,10·/˘··/˘···
Nor even the widows could be heard to weep.10·/·/˘·····
One might have thought their shaking was but laughter;11·····/˘··/˘
And, truly, most were married shortly after.11·/˘··/˘/˘··
Above the wreckage of that silent fray10···/˘··/˘·
Strange fishes swam in circles, round and round--10·/˘··/˘···
Black, double-finned; and once a little way10·/˘····/˘·
A bubble rose and burst without a sound10·/˘·······
And a man tumbled out upon the ground.10···/˘·····
Lord! 'twas an eerie thing to drift apace10···/˘···˘/
On that pellucid sea, beneath black skies10··˘/˘·····
And o'er the heads of an undrowning race;10··········
And when I woke I said--to her surprise10········˘/
Who came with chocolate, for me to drink it:10···/˘·····
"The atmosphere is deeper than you think it."11·/˘··/˘····

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