Conclusion

Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806–1861) · 1844

trochaic octameter · 46 lines · from Lady Geraldine's Courtship, and Other Poems

Bertram finished the last pages, while along the silence everStill in hot and heavy splashes fell the tears on every leaf.Having ended, he leans backward in his chair, with lips that quiverFrom the deep unspoken, ay, and deep unwritten thoughts of grief.

Soh! how still the lady standeth! 'T is a dream--a dream of mercies!'Twixt the purple lattice-curtains how she standeth still and pale!'T is a vision, sure, of mercies, sent to soften his self curses,Sent to sweep a patient quiet o'er the tossing of his wail.

"Eyes," he said, "now throbbing through me! are ye eyes that did undome?Shining eyes, like antique jewels set in Parian statue-stone!Underneath that calm white forehead are ye ever burning torridO'er the desolate sand-desert of my heart and life undone?"

With a murmurous stir uncertain, in the air the purple curtainSwelleth in and swelleth out around her motionless pale brows,While the gliding of the river sends a rippling noise for everThrough the open casement whitened by the moonlight's slant repose.

Said he--"Vision of a lady! stand there silent, stand there steady!Now I see it plainly, plainly now I cannot hope or doubt--There, the brows of mild repression--there, the lips of silent passion,Curved like an archer's bow to send the bitter arrows out."

Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,And approached him slowly, slowly, in a gliding measured pace;With her two white hands extended as if praying one offended,And a look of supplication gazing earnest in his face.

Said he--"Wake me by no gesture,--sound of breath, or stir of vesture!Let the blessed apparition melt not yet to its divine!No approaching--hush, no breathing! or my heart must swoon to death inThe too utter life thou bringest, O thou dream of Geraldine!"

Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,But the tears ran over lightly from her eyes and tenderly:--"Dost thou, Bertram, truly love me? Is no woman far above meFound more worthy of thy poet-heart than such a one as I?"

Said he--"I would dream so ever, like the flowing of that river,Flowing ever in a shadow greenly onward to the sea!So, thou vision of all sweetness, princely to a full completenessWould my heart and life flow onward, deathward, through this dream ofTHEE!"

Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,While the silver tears ran faster down the blushing of her cheeks;Then with both her hands enfolding both of his, she softly told him,"Bertram, if I say I love thee, ... 't is the vision only speaks."

Softened, quickened to adore her, on his knee he fell before her,And she whispered low in triumph, "It shall be as I have sworn.Very rich he is in virtues, very noble--noble, certes;And I shall not blush in knowing that men call him lowly born."

Words in this poem

bertram n.
Pellitory of Spain (Anacyclus pyrethrum). [Corrupted fr. L. pyrethrum, Gr. a hot spicy plant, fr. fire.]
unwritten a.
Not written; not reduced to writing; oral; as, unwritten agreements.
undone a.
Not done or performed; neglected. [Pref. un- not + done.]
murmurous a.
Attended with murmurs; exciting murmurs or complaint; murmuring. [Cf. L. murmuriosus, OF. murmuros.]
casement n.
A window sash opening on hinges affixed to the upright side of the frame into which it is fitted. (Poetically) A window. [Shortened fr. encasement. See Incase 1st Case, and cf. Incasement.]
evermore adv.
During eternity; always; forever; for an indefinite period; at all times; -- often used substantively with for.
tenderly adv.
In a tender manner; with tenderness; mildly; gently; softly; in a manner not to injure or give pain; with pity or affection; kindly.
greenly adv.
With a green color; newly; freshly, immaturely.
adore v. t.
To worship with profound reverence; to pay divine honors to; to honor as deity or as divine. [OE. aouren, anouren, adoren, OF. aorer, adorer, F. adorer, fr. L. adorare; ad + orare to speak, pray, os, oris, mouth. In OE. confused with honor, the French pr]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
certes adv.
Certainly; in truth; verily. [F. certes, for à certes, fr. L. certus. See Certain.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Conclusion is 46 lines in 11 stanzas. The metre is trochaic octameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).

See other poems in trochaic octameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-A ever · leafA · quiver · griefA
  2. 2 -A-A mercies · paleA · curses · wailA
  3. 5 -A-A steady · doubtA · passion · outA
  4. 6 -A-A smiling · paceA · offended · faceA
  5. 7 -AAA vesture · divineA · inA · geraldineA
  6. 8 --AA smiling · tenderly · meA · iA
  7. 9 -A--A river · seaA · completeness · of · theeA
  8. 10 -A-A smiling · cheeksA · him · speaksA
  9. 11 -A-A her · swornA · certes · bornA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic octameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Bertram finished the last pages, while along the silence ever16/˘/˘··/˘·˘/·/˘/˘
Still in hot and heavy splashes fell the tears on every leaf.16····/˘/˘····/˘˘·
Having ended, he leans backward in his chair, with lips that quiver16/˘/˘··/˘······/˘
From the deep unspoken, ay, and deep unwritten thoughts of grief.15···˘/˘···˘/˘···
Soh! how still the lady standeth! 'T is a dream--a dream of mercies!17····/˘/˘·······/˘
'Twixt the purple lattice-curtains how she standeth still and pale!15··/˘/˘/˘··/˘···
'T is a vision, sure, of mercies, sent to soften his self curses,17···/˘··/˘··/˘··/˘
Sent to sweep a patient quiet o'er the tossing of his wail.15····/˘/˘··/˘···
"Eyes," he said, "now throbbing through me! are ye eyes that did undo15····/˘·······˘/
me?1·
Shining eyes, like antique jewels set in Parian statue-stone!16/˘··˘//˘··/˘˘/··
Underneath that calm white forehead are ye ever burning torrid16·˘/···/˘··/˘/˘/˘
O'er the desolate sand-desert of my heart and life undone?"15··/˘··/˘·····˘/
With a murmurous stir uncertain, in the air the purple curtain17··/˘˘·˘/˘····/˘/˘
Swelleth in and swelleth out around her motionless pale brows,15/˘··/˘····/˘˘··
While the gliding of the river sends a rippling noise for ever17··/˘··/˘··/˘˘··/˘
Through the open casement whitened by the moonlight's slant repose.16··/˘/˘/˘˘··/··˘/
Said he--"Vision of a lady! stand there silent, stand there steady!16··/˘··/˘··/˘··/˘
Now I see it plainly, plainly now I cannot hope or doubt--15····/˘/˘··/˘···
There, the brows of mild repression--there, the lips of silent passion,16·····˘/˘····/˘/˘
Curved like an archer's bow to send the bitter arrows out."15·˘··/˘····/˘/˘·
Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,16/˘/˘······/˘··/˘
And approached him slowly, slowly, in a gliding measured pace;16·˘/˘·/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
With her two white hands extended as if praying one offended,16·····˘/˘··/˘·˘/˘
And a look of supplication gazing earnest in his face.15········/˘/˘···
Said he--"Wake me by no gesture,--sound of breath, or stir of vesture!16······/˘······/˘
Let the blessed apparition melt not yet to its divine!15···˘·˘/˘·····˘/
No approaching--hush, no breathing! or my heart must swoon to death in16·˘/˘··/˘········
The too utter life thou bringest, O thou dream of Geraldine!"15··/˘··/˘····˘˘/
Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,16/˘/˘······/˘··/˘
But the tears ran over lightly from her eyes and tenderly:--15······/˘····/˘˘
"Dost thou, Bertram, truly love me? Is no woman far above me16··/˘/˘····/˘····
Found more worthy of thy poet-heart than such a one as I?"15··/˘··/˘·······
Said he--"I would dream so ever, like the flowing of that river,16······/˘··/˘··/˘
Flowing ever in a shadow greenly onward to the sea!15/˘/˘··/·/˘/˘···
So, thou vision of all sweetness, princely to a full completeness16··/˘··/˘/˘···˘/˘
Would my heart and life flow onward, deathward, through this dream of14······/˘/˘····
THEE!"1·
Ever, evermore the while in a slow silence she kept smiling,16/˘/˘······/˘··/˘
While the silver tears ran faster down the blushing of her cheeks;15··/˘··/˘··/˘···
Then with both her hands enfolding both of his, she softly told him,16·····˘/˘····/˘··
"Bertram, if I say I love thee, ... 't is the vision only speaks."16/˘·········/˘/˘·
Softened, quickened to adore her, on his knee he fell before her,16/˘/˘·˘/·········
And she whispered low in triumph, "It shall be as I have sworn.16··/˘˘··/˘·······
Very rich he is in virtues, very noble--noble, certes;16/˘····/˘/˘/˘/˘/˘
And I shall not blush in knowing that men call him lowly born."15······/˘····/˘·

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