Woak Hill

William Barnes (1801–1886) · 1844–1862

common measure · unrhymed · 40 lines · from Poems of Rural Life in the Dorset Dialect

When sycamore leaves wer a-spreaden,Green-ruddy, in hedges,Bezide the red doust o' the ridges,A-dried at Woak Hill;

I packed up my goods all a-sheenenWi' long years o' handlen,On dousty red wheels ov a waggon,To ride at Woak Hill.

The brown thatchen ruf o' the dwellen,I then wer a-leaeven,Had shelter'd the sleek head o' Meaery,My bride at Woak Hill.

But now vor zome years, her light voot-vall'S a-lost vrom the vlooren.Too soon vor my jay an' my childern,She died at Woak Hill.

But still I do think that, in soul,She do hover about us;To ho vor her motherless childern,Her pride at Woak Hill.

Zoo--lest she should tell me hereafterI stole off 'ithout her,An' left her, uncall'd at house-ridden,To bide at Woak Hill--

I call'd her so fondly, wi' lippensAll soundless to others,An' took her wi' air-reachen hand,To my zide at Woak Hill.

On the road I did look round, a-talkenTo light at my shoulder,An' then led her in at the door-way,Miles wide vrom Woak Hill.

An' that's why vo'k thought, vor a season,My mind wer a-wandrenWi' sorrow, when I wer so sorelyA-tried at Woak Hill.

But no; that my Meaery mid neverBehold herzelf slighted,I wanted to think that I guidedMy guide vrom Woak Hill.

Words in this poem

hover n.
A cover; a shelter; a protection. Carew. C. Kingsley. [Etymol. doubtful.]
motherless a.
Destitute of a mother; having lost a mother; as, motherless children. [AS. modorleás.]
hereafter adv.
In time to come; in some future time or state. [AS. hræfter.]
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
bide v. i.
To dwell; to inhabit; to abide; to stay. [OE. biden, AS. bidan; akin to OHG. bitan, Goth. beidan, Icel. bi; perh. orig., to wait with trust, and akin to bid. See Bid, v. t., and cf. Abide.]
fondly adv.
Foolishly. Verstegan (1673).
soundless a.
Not capable of being sounded or fathomed; unfathomable.
sorely adv.
In a sore manner; grievously; painfully; as, to be sorely afflicted.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Woak Hill is 40 lines in 10 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 73%). 94% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.3 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 22% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 AA-- sheenenA · handlenA · waggon · hill
  2. 3 AA-- dwellenA · leaevenA · meaery · hill
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
When sycamore leaves wer a-spreaden,9·/˘······
Green-ruddy, in hedges,6·/˘·/˘
Bezide the red doust o' the ridges,9·······/˘
A-dried at Woak Hill;5·····
I packed up my goods all a-sheenen9·········
Wi' long years o' handlen,6······
On dousty red wheels ov a waggon,9·········
To ride at Woak Hill.5·····
The brown thatchen ruf o' the dwellen,9·········
I then wer a-leaeven,6······
Had shelter'd the sleek head o' Meaery,9·/˘······
My bride at Woak Hill.5·····
But now vor zome years, her light voot-vall9·········
'S a-lost vrom the vlooren.7·······
Too soon vor my jay an' my childern,9·········
She died at Woak Hill.5·····
But still I do think that, in soul,8········
She do hover about us;7··/˘···
To ho vor her motherless childern,8····/˘··
Her pride at Woak Hill.5·····
Zoo--lest she should tell me hereafter9······˘/˘
I stole off 'ithout her,6······
An' left her, uncall'd at house-ridden,9···˘/··/˘
To bide at Woak Hill--5·····
I call'd her so fondly, wi' lippens9····/˘·/˘
All soundless to others,6·/˘·/˘
An' took her wi' air-reachen hand,8········
To my zide at Woak Hill.6······
On the road I did look round, a-talken10··········
To light at my shoulder,6····/˘
An' then led her in at the door-way,9·········
Miles wide vrom Woak Hill.5·····
An' that's why vo'k thought, vor a season,9·······/˘
My mind wer a-wandren6······
Wi' sorrow, when I wer so sorely9·/˘····/˘
A-tried at Woak Hill.5·····
But no; that my Meaery mid never9·······/˘
Behold herzelf slighted,6˘/··/˘
I wanted to think that I guided9·/˘····/˘
My guide vrom Woak Hill.5·····

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