Part V

Samuel Taylor Coleridge (1772–1834) · 1798, text of 1834

common measure · ABCB · 118 lines · from The Rime of the Ancient Mariner

Oh sleep! it is a gentle thing,Beloved from pole to pole!To Mary Queen the praise be given!She sent the gentle sleep from Heaven,That slid into my soul.

The silly buckets on the deck,That had so long remained,I dreamt that they were filled with dew;And when I awoke, it rained.

My lips were wet, my throat was cold,My garments all were dank;Sure I had drunken in my dreams,And still my body drank.

I moved, and could not feel my limbs:I was so light--almostI thought that I had died in sleep,And was a blessed ghost.

And soon I heard a roaring wind:It did not come anear;But with its sound it shook the sails,That were so thin and sere.

The upper air burst into life!And a hundred fire-flags sheen,To and fro they were hurried about!And to and fro, and in and out,The wan stars danced between.

And the coming wind did roar more loud,And the sails did sigh like sedge;And the rain poured down from one black cloud;The Moon was at its edge.

The thick black cloud was cleft, and stillThe Moon was at its side:Like waters shot from some high crag,The lightning fell with never a jag,A river steep and wide.

The loud wind never reached the ship,Yet now the ship moved on!Beneath the lightning and the MoonThe dead men gave a groan.

They groaned, they stirred, they all uprose,Nor spake, nor moved their eyes;It had been strange, even in a dream,To have seen those dead men rise.

The helmsman steered, the ship moved on;Yet never a breeze up blew;The mariners all 'gan work the ropes,Where they were wont to do:They raised their limbs like lifeless tools--We were a ghastly crew.

The body of my brother's son,Stood by me, knee to knee:The body and I pulled at one rope,But he said nought to me.

"I fear thee, ancient Mariner!"Be calm, thou Wedding-Guest!'Twas not those souls that fled in pain,Which to their corses came again,But a troop of spirits blest:

For when it dawned--they dropped their arms,And clustered round the mast;Sweet sounds rose slowly through their mouths,And from their bodies passed.

Around, around, flew each sweet sound,Then darted to the Sun;Slowly the sounds came back again,Now mixed, now one by one.

Sometimes a-dropping from the skyI heard the sky-lark sing;Sometimes all little birds that are,How they seemed to fill the sea and airWith their sweet jargoning!

And now 'twas like all instruments,Now like a lonely flute;And now it is an angel's song,That makes the Heavens be mute.

It ceased; yet still the sails made onA pleasant noise till noon,A noise like of a hidden brookIn the leafy month of June,That to the sleeping woods all nightSingeth a quiet tune.

Till noon we quietly sailed on,Yet never a breeze did breathe:Slowly and smoothly went the ship,Moved onward from beneath.

Under the keel nine fathom deep,From the land of mist and snow,The spirit slid: and it was heThat made the ship to go.The sails at noon left off their tune,And the ship stood still also.

The Sun, right up above the mast,Had fixed her to the ocean:But in a minute she 'gan stir,With a short uneasy motion--Backwards and forwards half her lengthWith a short uneasy motion.

Then like a pawing horse let go,She made a sudden bound:It flung the blood into my head,And I fell down in a swound.

How long in that same fit I lay,I have not to declare;But ere my living life returned,I heard and in my soul discernedTwo VOICES in the air.

"Is it he?" quoth one, "Is this the man?By him who died on cross,With his cruel bow he laid full low,The harmless Albatross.

"The spirit who bideth by himselfIn the land of mist and snow,He loved the bird that loved the manWho shot him with his bow."

The other was a softer voice,As soft as honey-dew:Quoth he, "The man hath penance done,And penance more will do."

Words in this poem

dank n.
Moisture; humidity; water.
drank n.
Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
anear v. t.
To near; to approach.
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
sere n.
Claw; talon. Chapman. [F. serre.]
sheen v. i.
To shine; to glisten.
crag n.
The neck or throat [A form of craw: cf. D. kraag neck, collar, G. kragen. See Craw.]
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
quoth v. t.
Said; spoke; uttered; -- used only in the first and third persons in the past tenses, and always followed by its nominative, the word or words said being the object; as, quoth I. quoth he. [AS.cweedhan, imp cwæedh, pl. cwædon; akin to OS. queedhan, OHG. quethan, quedan, Icel. kveedha, Goth. qiþan. sq. root22. Cf. Bequeath.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Part V is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, Project Gutenberg ebook #151; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Part V is 118 lines in 26 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABCB, complete in 16 of its 26 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 11% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A--A thing · poleA · given · heaven · soulA
  2. 2 ABCB deckA · remainedB · dewC · rainedB
  3. 3 ABCB coldA · dankB · dreamsC · drankB
  4. 4 ABCB limbsA · almostB · sleepC · ghostB
  5. 5 ABCB windA · anearB · sailsC · sereB
  6. 6 -ABBA life · sheenA · aboutB · outB · betweenA
  7. 7 ABCB loudA · sedgeB · cloudC · edgeB
  8. 8 -ABBA still · sideA · cragB · jagB · wideA
  9. 9 ABCB shipA · onB · moonC · groanB
  10. 10 ABCB uproseA · eyesB · dreamC · riseB
  11. 11 -A-A-A on · blewA · ropes · doA · tools · crewA
  12. 12 ABCB sonA · kneeB · ropeC · meB
  13. 13 -ABBA mariner · guestA · painB · againB · blestA
  14. 14 ABCB armsA · mastB · mouthsC · passedB
  15. 15 ABCB soundA · sunB · againC · oneB
  16. 16 -A--A sky · singA · are · air · jargoningA
  17. 17 ABCB instrumentsA · fluteB · songC · muteB
  18. 18 -A-A-A on · noonA · brook · juneA · night · tuneA
  19. 19 ABCB onA · breatheB · shipC · beneathB
  20. 20 -A-A-- deep · snowA · he · goA · tune · also
  21. 21 -A-A-A mast · oceanA · stir · motionA · length · motionA
  22. 22 ABCB goA · boundB · headC · swoundB
  23. 23 -ABBA lay · declareA · returnedB · discernedB · airA
  24. 24 ABCB manA · crossB · lowC · albatrossB
  25. 25 ABCB himselfA · snowB · manC · bowB
  26. 26 ABCB voiceA · dewB · doneC · doB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Oh sleep! it is a gentle thing,8·····/˘·
Beloved from pole to pole!7˘/˘····
To Mary Queen the praise be given!9·/˘····/˘
She sent the gentle sleep from Heaven,9···/˘··/˘
That slid into my soul.6······
The silly buckets on the deck,8·/˘/˘···
That had so long remained,7····˘/˘
I dreamt that they were filled with dew;8········
And when I awoke, it rained.8···˘/··˘
My lips were wet, my throat was cold,8········
My garments all were dank;6·/˘···
Sure I had drunken in my dreams,8···/˘···
And still my body drank.6···/˘·
I moved, and could not feel my limbs:8········
I was so light--almost6····/·
I thought that I had died in sleep,8········
And was a blessed ghost.5·····
And soon I heard a roaring wind:8·····/˘·
It did not come anear;6····˘/
But with its sound it shook the sails,8········
That were so thin and sere.6······
The upper air burst into life!8·/˘·····
And a hundred fire-flags sheen,8··/˘/˘··
To and fro they were hurried about!9·····/˘··
And to and fro, and in and out,8········
The wan stars danced between.7····˘··
And the coming wind did roar more loud,9··/˘·····
And the sails did sigh like sedge;7·······
And the rain poured down from one black cloud;9·········
The Moon was at its edge.6······
The thick black cloud was cleft, and still8········
The Moon was at its side:6······
Like waters shot from some high crag,8·/˘·····
The lightning fell with never a jag,8·/˘··/··
A river steep and wide.6·/˘···
The loud wind never reached the ship,8···/˘···
Yet now the ship moved on!7·····˘·
Beneath the lightning and the Moon8···/˘···
The dead men gave a groan.6······
They groaned, they stirred, they all uprose,8········
Nor spake, nor moved their eyes;7····˘··
It had been strange, even in a dream,8····/···
To have seen those dead men rise.7·······
The helmsman steered, the ship moved on;8·/······
Yet never a breeze up blew;7·/˘····
The mariners all 'gan work the ropes,8·/˘·····
Where they were wont to do:6······
They raised their limbs like lifeless tools--8·····/˘·
We were a ghastly crew.6···/˘·
The body of my brother's son,8·/˘··/˘·
Stood by me, knee to knee:6······
The body and I pulled at one rope,9·/˘······
But he said nought to me.6······
"I fear thee, ancient Mariner!"8···/˘/˘˘
Be calm, thou Wedding-Guest!6···/˘·
'Twas not those souls that fled in pain,8········
Which to their corses came again,8···/˘·˘/
But a troop of spirits blest:7····/˘·
For when it dawned--they dropped their arms,8········
And clustered round the mast;7·/˘˘···
Sweet sounds rose slowly through their mouths,8···/˘···
And from their bodies passed.7···/˘·˘
Around, around, flew each sweet sound,8········
Then darted to the Sun;6·/˘···
Slowly the sounds came back again,8/˘····˘/
Now mixed, now one by one.7··˘····
Sometimes a-dropping from the sky8˘/·/˘···
I heard the sky-lark sing;6······
Sometimes all little birds that are,8˘/·/˘···
How they seemed to fill the sea and air9·········
With their sweet jargoning!6···/˘˘
And now 'twas like all instruments,8·····/˘˘
Now like a lonely flute;6···/˘·
And now it is an angel's song,8·····/˘·
That makes the Heavens be mute.7···/˘··
It ceased; yet still the sails made on8········
A pleasant noise till noon,6·/˘···
A noise like of a hidden brook8·····/˘·
In the leafy month of June,7··/˘···
That to the sleeping woods all night8···/˘···
Singeth a quiet tune.6/˘·/˘·
Till noon we quietly sailed on,8···/˘˘··
Yet never a breeze did breathe:7·/˘····
Slowly and smoothly went the ship,8/˘·/˘···
Moved onward from beneath.7·˘/˘···
Under the keel nine fathom deep,8·····/˘·
From the land of mist and snow,7·······
The spirit slid: and it was he8·/˘·····
That made the ship to go.6······
The sails at noon left off their tune,8········
And the ship stood still also.7·····/˘
The Sun, right up above the mast,8········
Had fixed her to the ocean:8··˘···/˘
But in a minute she 'gan stir,8···/˘···
With a short uneasy motion--8···˘/˘/˘
Backwards and forwards half her length8/˘·/˘···
With a short uneasy motion.8···˘/˘/˘
Then like a pawing horse let go,8···/˘···
She made a sudden bound:6···/˘·
It flung the blood into my head,8········
And I fell down in a swound.7·······
How long in that same fit I lay,8········
I have not to declare;6····˘/
But ere my living life returned,8···/˘·˘/
I heard and in my soul discerned8······˘/
Two VOICES in the air.6·/˘···
"Is it he?" quoth one, "Is this the man?9·········
By him who died on cross,6······
With his cruel bow he laid full low,8··/·····
The harmless Albatross.6·/˘/˘·
"The spirit who bideth by himself8·/····˘/
In the land of mist and snow,7·······
He loved the bird that loved the man8········
Who shot him with his bow."6······
The other was a softer voice,8·/˘··/˘·
As soft as honey-dew:6···/˘·
Quoth he, "The man hath penance done,8·····/˘·
And penance more will do."6·/˘···
Notes from the edition 11

Marginal gloss by Coleridge (1817); notes by Frederick H. Sykes, Coleridge's Ancient Mariner and Select Poems (Scribner, c. 1908).

  1. Stanza 2 Gloss: By grace of the holy Mother, the ancient Mariner is refreshed with rain.
  2. Stanza 2, line 1 silly. This word meant in Old English timely (from soel, time, occasion) hence fortunate, blessed. From this was developed, under the influence of medieval religious teaching, the meaning innocent, harmless, simple; and from this again our modern meaning, foolish, simple in a derogatory sense. Chaucer has the word in all these meanings, and also in another, a modification of the second--wretched, pitiable. Another shade of the same meaning appears in Spenser's "silly bark," i.e. frail ship, and in Burns's "To a Mouse":

    "Thy wee bit housie, too, in ruin! Its silly wa's the win's are strewin'!"

    "The epithet may be due either to the gush of love that has filled the Mariner's heart, or to his noticing the buckets, long useless, frail, now filled with water" (Sykes); very likely to both together.
  3. Stanza 5 Gloss: He heareth sounds and seeth strange sights and commotions in the sky and the element.
  4. Stanza 6, line 2 fire-flags. The notion of the "fire-flags" "hurried about" was probably suggested to Coleridge by the description of the Northern Lights (aurora borealis) in Hearne's "Journey ... to the Northern Ocean," a book printed in 1795 and known to both Wordsworth and Coleridge before 1798. Hearne says: "I can positively affirm that in still nights I have frequently heard them make a rustling and crackling noise, like the waving of a large flag in a fresh gale of wind." See also Wordsworth's "Complaint of a Forsaken Indian Woman" (Cooper).
  5. Stanza 9 Gloss: The bodies of the ship's crew are inspired, and the ship moves on;
  6. Stanza 13 Gloss: The Wedding-Guest feareth that a Spirit is talking to him;
  7. Stanza 13 Gloss: But not by the souls of the men, nor by daemons of earth or middle air, but by a blessed troop of angelic spirits, sent down by the invocation of the guardian saint.
  8. Stanza 16, line 1 Sometimes a-dropping, etc. The Mariner's sin was that in wanton cruelty he took the life of a friendly fellow-creature; his punishment is to live with dead men round him and the dead bird on his breast, in such solitude that "God himself scarce seemed there to be," until he learns to feel the sacredness of life even in the water-snakes, the "slimy things" that coil in the rotting sea; and the stages of his penance are marked by suggestions of his return to the privilege of human fellowship. The angels' music is like the song of the skylark, the sails ripple like a leaf-hidden brook--recollections of his happy boyhood in. England; and finally comes the actual land breeze, and he is in his "own countree." Observe the marginal gloss to line 442.
  9. Stanza 20 Gloss: The lonesome Spirit from the south-pole carries on the ship as far as the Line, in obedience to the angelic troop, but still requireth vengeance.
  10. Stanza 23 Gloss: The Polar Spirit's fellow-daemons, the invisible inhabitants of the element, take part in his wrong; and two of them relate, one to the other, that penance long and heavy for the ancient Mariner hath been accorded to the Polar Spirit, who returneth southward.
  11. Stanza 26, line 2 honey-dew. See note on "Kubla Khan," line 53.

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