Iii.—3

Mark Akenside (1721–1770) · 1744

iambic pentameter · 12 lines · from The Poetical Works of Mark Akenside

While thus our vows prolongThy steps on earth, and when by us resign'dThou join'st thy seniors, that heroic throngWho rescued or preserved the rights of human kind,Oh! not unworthy may thy Albion's tongueThee still, her friend and benefactor, name:Oh! never, Hoadly, in thy country's eyes,May impious gold, or pleasure's gaudy prize,Make public virtue, public freedom, vile;Nor our own manners tempt us to disclaimThat heritage, our noblest wealth and fame,Which thou hast kept entire from force and factious guile.

Words in this poem

disclaim v. t.
To renounce all claim to deny; ownership of, or responsibility for; to disown; to disavow; to reject.
heritage a.
That which is inherited, or passes from heir to heir; inheritance. [OE. heritage, eritage, OF. heritage, eritage, F. héritage, fr. hériter to inherit, LL. heriditare. See Hereditable.]
wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Iii.—3 is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetical Works of Mark Akenside, Project Gutenberg ebook #9814; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Mark Akenside, Iii.—3, in The Poetical Works of Mark Akenside (1744), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #9814, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/akenside-poems/iii-3-5.html, id L09532.

Form and metre

Iii.—3 is 12 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.2 syllables. 42% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB-CDDECCE prolongA · resign'dB · throngA · kindB · tongue · nameC · eyesD · prizeD · vileE · disclaimC · fameC · guileE
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
While thus our vows prolong7··/˘·˘/
Thy steps on earth, and when by us resign'd10········˘/
Thou join'st thy seniors, that heroic throng10···/˘·˘/˘·
Who rescued or preserved the rights of human kind,12·/˘·˘/···/˘·
Oh! not unworthy may thy Albion's tongue10··˘/˘··/˘·
Thee still, her friend and benefactor, name:10·····/˘·˘·
Oh! never, Hoadly, in thy country's eyes,10·/˘····/˘·
May impious gold, or pleasure's gaudy prize,11·˘/˘··/˘/˘·
Make public virtue, public freedom, vile;10·/˘/˘/˘/˘·
Nor our own manners tempt us to disclaim10·/·/˘···˘/
That heritage, our noblest wealth and fame,10·/˘˘//˘···
Which thou hast kept entire from force and factious guile.12····˘/···/˘·

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